First off I love your story and have read several of your other stories and love them too. About the review you got from Luke Shaehl he was completely right about your portrayal of the characters. They are completely OOC and everything else he said was accurate (I'm Terrible at grammar, so I can't comment on that. I personally don't see any major problems with it in your writing. ) I'm also a writer and if someone wrote me a review like that I would be thankful for pointing out things I could have done better. His review was constructive criticism and is something that every writer needs to become a better writer. I think Jinx is a great friend but way over protective of you. Whoever's wrote the review saying Luke Shaehl had no right to criticize your work was wrong and you were wrong to post it as well. He and every reviewer has the right to criticize your work because that is the point of a review. A review isn't just for receiving compliments but to get constructive criticism about a story so a writer can grow and become better at being a writer. Now personally when I read fanfics I take that the author of the story is creating their own world using the characters of the story. This why I don't complain about Oocnes and whether it is believable. However some do care about that and have every right to complain as long as they do politely. Luke Shaehl was very polite in his review and you should be thankful for his advice if you want to grow as a writer. I love your stories and look forward to more. I hope you and Jinx can learn to have thicker skin because if Luke Shaehl review upset you this much what will you do when you get a truly nasty flamer.

I love u stories u were the first Arthur In fanfiction I read destiny for me was my first fanfic I read u got me hook on fanfic I always come back to read ur stories will u please post them back up I miss ur stories ur a really good writer don’t listen to dumb people I have read some bad fanfic but I just didn’t read it I found another fanfic but destine for me was my favorite please come back

I was so sad to discover your stories gone. I've sent you a PM regarding one of them (which was my all time favorite) Please dont let the naysayers get you down. Your an amazing writer and the way you write Kagome is just how I envision her. She's brave, strong, and can handle her own problems (kinda like me lol). I hope you decide to publish your stories somewhere else because I SINCERELY ENJOYED READING THEM! TT I heartbroken that Destined For Me is gone it was my all time favorite to read.

I'm sad that you decided to take down your stories. I absolutely love them. Don't listen to nasty people who doesn't even write their own stories and like to slam does who do. That's just envy on their part. I would love to know if you have them on another platform so that I could keep reading them there.
Much love
Alybethed

Me encantan tus historias me gustaría que las compartieras nuevamente, los comentarios negativos de esas personas no deben influenciarte, de manera personal me gusta tu manera de escribir, eres una de las pocas autoras que tienen un gran talento.
Si lamentablemente para mí no publicas nuevamente tus historias comparte por favor, sería una lástima que se queden olvidadas en tu biblioteca personal y no poder leerlas nuevamente.
lizzy . rase gmail . com

It's Throne not Thrown. Dying not Dieing ,and Coma not Comma.

I adored this story. I especially loved Jinx, she was phenomenal. :3

Kagome is supposed to be this badass miko who has taken on everything by herself. Heck, she blasted the demon who hurt Inu & didn't back down. Why did she resort to human vs demon with Kouga?

I bet miroku is really naraku T-T

WTF? Sorry for being rude but really, Is this Twilight? The main character Kagome is fucking perfect, absolutely marie sue, and Inuyasha is too OOC, and also perfect as hell. Actually, the plot is quite interesting, but It's just soooooo romantic and stupid that make me want to puke. Don't be sad, I guest your fanfic is quite good, but It's not my type, too sweet.

I'm not an English, so forgive me for my crappy language

Cute...love the controlling necklaces and how kagome turned full demon

cool :D

Awesome loved it great job loved the story and will aways love Jinxs

Hey who ever gave that rude ass REVIEW better learn some manners! I love this story! I think Jinx is awesome and I love ur stories! Plaza (pleased) make more stories! :D 3 •• LOVE YOU! Btw I'm ur new fan! I'm Rebecca Banta But call me Becky cuz I like u as a friend. Ty!

I know what kind of demon miroku is!...HES A PERVERT DEMON!