I like it

Nice.

great chapter.

... you never finished :( u make evildoomchick sad

update update update soon soon soon. because i want to see what is going to happen.

Please update soon:)

i like it so far sound interesting. i luv mulan and shang parings

Good story update soon:

Moonmage

What will happen next? Will Shang be able to find her? Please post more as soon as possible.

The whole "I wonder where Mulan [is] going don't you" thing was kind of lame, and it seems be just some way of getting people to review your story. This first part you have is good, but the conversation seems a little . . . stiff. None of it sounds natural, and some of the words you used were too strong ("forsaken" doesn't sound right when she's talking about her friends.)

ok that whole "I Wonder were Mulan going don’t you. Come Closer and I tell you.

Closer

Closer

Closer

Closer

Ok see the blue button, no that one the other one. You know by the View bock. Yeah that one. Push and your fined out were Mulan’s going" was stupid... anyways it sounded good so far! keep on going, just lose the last part and it will be even better! dont mean to be mean or anything like that

So...Where's Mulan going?

Awesome start with the story. I'm very happy because...I know how to spell AWESOME. Isn;t it awesome?

Anyway, I hope she'll go to Shang ::hint hint::

~Maggie

Great story! please continue!