Omg. She kept secrets with Dan too? Nathans right. What the hell did he ever do to deserve her just lying her ass off all the time about everything that's important? That's not a relationship and she would never deserve one with him. They should be civil
For their child and he should do anything including take her to court for his rights to the baby, but move on from this disaster of a relationship.

This is getting beyond ridiculous. Unnecessary drama is an understatement. It would be more interesting if you wrote more dealing with emotions and less dialogue and shock factor drama. It's so shallow for Haley to be pregnant a second time and hide the kid again after she was supposed to be "sorry" for the last time, and then she comes to town and takes Brooke's kid without even notifying Nathan? At this point, every bad feeling he has about her is completely deserved. I think he needs to find someone better than her, and this is coming from a naley fan!

I find it really annoying that Haley ditched him without so much as a word and now she's acting like she hates him and he deserves her wrath. What bullshit.

I love this story. You are an amazing writer. Please finish!

Je sais que cette histoire n'a pas été mise à jour depuis longtemps mais s'il te plait tu ne peux pas la laisser comme ça ! Que du suspens, je veux plus du naley et du Nathan jaloux vu son comportement.. Il a même pas tenu compte des sentiments de Haley quand elle lui avouer son viol.. C'est à lui de ramer, pas elle ! S'il te plait reprend ou au moins fais un épilogue !

Sorry I'm french.

please update this story what HAPPENS WITH NALEY awesome story so far

Hey
I know U havnt updated this story in a very long time.
But if U still visit this site n read the new reviews of your stories then please please do try to update this one
I am dying to know what's gonna happen next.
I feel really bad when writers leave their stories like specially if the story is this good.
Plz plz ...do try to update this one .
I am in love with this one(one of the best naley stories.

I thought this story was really good until I got to the part of Haley being pregnant again and now I can no longer read it.
Reasons because after how guilty she suppose felt about how Nathan never got to meet their first child and how bad she felt for taking that chance away from him, but then she gets pregnant again and does the same thing not going back or telling him.
Even though there are like 20 chapters left and I've read around 30 I am no longer going to read this because I have lost all respect for the character Haley in this story. It makes no sense to me whatsoever for her actions and even if in the future chapters of the story she has a good reason for doing that again. There is no excuse that would be good enough that she could possibly have to redeem herself in my eyes.
Exactly what Nathan said to Lucas is too true, she seems selfish now and cares only about herself.

Great writing though I just can't continue reading due to the lack of respect I have for her character.

I really enjoyed your story...I've noticed you haven't updated since 2006 are you done with this story? are you going to continue at all?

Sorry to review again, still love the story, only question, (as an Aussie) why Schapelle?

Just finished your story, it is a great story and ditto, if you ever get the inspiration, pls come back and finish. So feel for Haley in this, Nathan is such an ass. Nice to see Deb with such a sympathetic character portrayal.

I hope yo come back to finish this story! Maybe put Naley together for a baby check and N will see the baby and heat the heartbeat and ...

please finish it!

Omg! I found this story maybe 2 days ago and I couldn't stop reading it until I got to your latest update. It's been a while since you last updated it, if you ever get the chance or insperation to finish this story that would be AMAZING! This story it such a great story it shouldn't be left without an ending!

But if you don't finish it thanks for still writing what you did!

Love the story never have reviewed a story have read hundreds if not thousands. I had to submit a review and beg for more I see you haven't added any in a long time please do you have done a great job.

i know prly rly random but i jus fond and read ur sory an i fell in love wit i know its ben awhile since u upated but i was kind of hoping u could i wld rly love to see wat hons with naley ur story its gr8 i love angsty stories and urs is jus fille wit it...