| Reviews for Prongslet |
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Tanu123 chapter 15 . 6/16 Can you have a play date at the Weasley’s? And for Harry to think that Ginny is kind of cute and fun! |
peg441asus chapter 29 . 6/3 I like George best. He's a little more thoughtful and sensitive. (George approaches Harry to help him with his trunk). |
peg441asus chapter 28 . 6/3 I find your story interesting. It's a little hard to follow jumping around from plot to plot. I think you have too many going at once. I also don't understand Sirius's aversion to reading. In the books, James and Sirius didn't like to study but they were still got decent grades. Afterall Sirius and Remus gave Harry an entire set of DADA books for Christmas. |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/12 Fist some thoughts number one I felt that you portrayed Harry a bit less like an abused boy. Can I get an explanation please? |
AARaven14 chapter 41 . 5/9 ahem. Where is the modified story? |
MidnightRose67 chapter 3 . 11/17/2019 Good if Harry sang ‘I think I’m gonna like it here’ from Annie? The shoe are both orphans and were left in a horrible environment,then taken away by caring a plot bunny,I’ll probably use it for my OC tho |
Random Person chapter 27 . 9/5/2019 Bellatrix |
Random Person chapter 26 . 9/4/2019 Holly moly. Remember me, the one who had DID. Well I(Fire/Water) can detect emotions and guess pretty well what people are thinking. (Coincidence?) And me (the other one) can tell if someone is trustworthy, and am really good with animals, I can almost communicate with my dog. Is that the earth power. But holy moly, coincidence, or are you and I ones who are or know about Elementals... |
Random Person chapter 24 . 9/4/2019 Fire and water. One to balance the other. But my other self, (I have DID, look it up) would have wind and earth I would have fire and my first, and me would have wind first. |
HuntressOfTheUnknown chapter 41 . 8/6/2019 "Hindsight is 20/20" and "You are your own harshest critic" are both very true. Your writing could use a little work and you've likely learned quite a bit since writing this so you can improve it. However, it's a pretty good story as is and you should be proud of it. You only judge it so harshly because it's your work and now you can do it and include everything you've learned. It's a great story and I hope you eventually continue it. |
MadisonPotter22 chapter 41 . 8/6/2019 Continue plz |
MadisonPotter22 chapter 36 . 8/6/2019 Over a hundred each book. |
OneDocToHealThemAll chapter 1 . 7/10/2019 Venus914 someone really didn’t understand the Weasleys at all. Childish hatred! |
Guest chapter 41 . 5/7/2019 THAT WAS NOT A Very good ending |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17/2019 How old was he in chapter two? |