Hmm, this is really well written! Loving it so far. Update soon? :D

I really hope you have plans to continue this, even though it's been 7 years. That's a long time. I've just recently started to watch 21 Jumpstreet, and decided to look for some good stories out there. Congratulations! I found your story. So...continue please?

This is really good! Continue as fast as you can please

Came across this story and noticed you'd written it years ago... I'm assuming you have no intention of picking it back up, but I think you have a really good feel for the characters, their dialogue, and mannerisms. I hope at some point you'll pick back up again. If not with this story, something else. :)

omg PLEASE CONTINUE! i love the story so far! the mcquaid brothers are my fav cover! this story is promising!

AMAZING! Please, please, please continue! I think this is the best characterization I've seen for Jump Street - you've captured the McQuaids PERFECTLY.

You're gonna continue this, right? Please do. It's just perfect. I can't really find a thing wrong with it, even the overwriting doesn't bother me, where usually it would. Please, I'm begging you, update this.

holy hell. I've read some amazing 21 Jump Street fanfics, but you have PERFECTLY captured the McQuaids. people (including me) seem to have a lot of trouble with their smart-assed mouths, but you've got them DOWN, man. and you actually got the SMART part of it, too. I BOW TO YOU NOW.

although I'm absolutely devastated to see that this is three years old! if you ever decide to finish this, I would LOVE to see how it goes.

(by the way, I love the line "Et tu, Brute?", especially when it's thrown out of context into random situations. *applause*)

Now you have to update. this is just too interesting.

Oh man I love this! I love the ending when they are in the chapel! perfect!

this is very funny. i was wondering if you were going to finish it. i am not sure how long it has been up. thank you

come on you're killing me here! Update PLEASE! Dont make me join A Sparrow's soul in her quest for murder. write some more of your excellent story and give us all something brilliant to read HEH!

You are going to contiune this right? Because if you don't, i would have to come, hunt you down, and kill you. That particularly wouldn't be fun for me, as I've never killed anyone and I'm not fond of cleaning up messes...so to fix said problem, please update.

Your writing is very astoudning, great use of description, though, - and i'm not trying to be bitchy- sometimes it can be overdone, but as you've said, ' the english language was meant to be used' or along the lines. And after chapter one you seemed to tone down a tad- lol, yes can you see i type as i read lol.

Characters are doing well, you're improving with them each time. Humor wise, brilliant love, i especially loved the mention of Lord Byron in chapter one- i absolutely love his work. The banter in chapter 2 between Doug and Tom was brilliant, and the rhythm for them, spot on. All i can say is that in chapter 3, it was as if they were telling you what to write. Legendary me dear.

Your writing style reminds me of a certain famous author, though I can't place, a sort of mixture of J. and a hint of dear ol' Shakespere. But that's not who I am thinking of...damn.

Really enojying this. Please contine, I'd bow and all, but I'm currently in a knee brace so...just imagine it :D Again, fantastic writing and story, love where this is going.

Gah, i still can't believe how fantastic this is, oh, you so better update. My wrath is not one to be near, and worse still to be the cause of.

Again, great job. And are you guna update this, 'cause I saw you hadn't in a while, an' it's gettin' good, and ya... Lol. But I loved this chapter, specially when Tommy burst into the room, and again, your portrayal of em is perfect. But please update, it's a great start:D

Another great job, loved Tommy's character as you portrayed, really seemed him, well Tommy McQuaid, lol, again. Good job, now I'm off to read the next chapter:D