Beautiful story. I haven't read a story this good in a long time. Thank you...

Wow, that was really good. You are an awesome writer.

ooh this was good. and of corse its a DA fic- phil was an awesome character. very well done. written believably. francesca was so cute! and a very well rounded character. awesome job, Mystic.

Nicely done. You do a good job of showing us how Francesca had developed, how their mother treated them both, and-most importantly here-how they got along: very well, with a little bit of big-brother/little-sister annoyance now and then. I like that. I can't imagine dealing with a break-in like this and am so glad I didn't have to during those times I was watching my brother, who is four years younger than I am.

Thanks for filling in Phil's history here. :)