I don't even know who the groom is.. or if it's the groom who called.. XD

I'm sorry i thought the story was good until this chapter 18. Because whytf is kaoru a spoiled and super dumb little girl who doesn't even know her own limits in this story? She made me sooooo angry! I hate her even more than Miguel and Enishi put together! Kenshin is too good for her! she is THE most stupidest character in the story. She thought she was good enough to fight against thugs when she doesn't even know how to kick a gun out somebody's hand. She thinks her plan is perfect and that nobody knows in the beginning,WRONG. She leaves her special sexy underwear where it's easily discoverable. She thought she could sleep with Kenshin when Sano's in the house and right in the other room. She thought she explained everything well to the neighbors and thought they believed her. WRONG. She can't do anything right it seems. She doesn't even realize that she shouldn't make plans with other guys if she has Kenshin! She agreed to meet Enishi's sister sometime and was going to eat dinner with the Ryubaru-person. Next time you write a story with, try not to make all the problems in the plot happen because Kaoru is an idiot and does all kinds of stupid things. No offense, but it makes the story seem stupid, too.

you need to say were the chap starts

Awesum story! But a few errors here and there, but no matter, all is good!

Please don't post this as 'complete' when it's not. I'm searching for completed stories so I won't have to wait for alerts and risk of waiting forever. I read 22 chapters straight knowing it's done and then I'll see a note on the last chap saying, "...it is not even completed yet."

That's all. I hope you understand my point.

Plz finish ! its jus gettin good! D

Please finish, the story was just getting to the climax! We're all waiting on u! D

I simply loved this fic and I hope book 2 doesnt take as long to complete

O.o

Wow... what a way to end the chapter. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

I'm impressed you finished this then started the next one right away. There seems like there is a whole lot more to go, I can't wait to know how things will turn out. I can see the improvements in your writing over the five years of this fic. The flow and story have always been good but there were little bits of error that gradually disappear as the story goes on.

Great job!

Great story! It's pity you stopped writing it... Enishi is completely nuts! Great work!

I like the story so far :) The incorrect grammer is kind of distracting though :) But, I like the story anyway :) Good job.

YAY I GUESSED IT IT REALLY WAS KAORU AND KENSHIN IN THE FIRST CHAPPY! YAY!

aw yay kenshin and kaoru r finally together! but just a heads up, the ending pt wasnt a lemon, it was more ...lime than a lemon cuz a lemon is... er..."full out" if u know wat I mean. a lime is more like... um... uh touching I guess. lemons r more... detailed but anyway, that was so cute that kenshin asked kaoru to dance. I almost squealed out loud if it wernt for the fact that I'm in school right now. lol great job!

lol kaoru pregnant. nice. hehehe and I was accualy starting to blieve it when mrs... um... sry I dk her name said that she was still a virgin just by her pulse. hehehe im so gullible sometimes.