Wow, this was a deep story. Memories always seem to be that way. Sniff sniff. Good work. Maybe one more chapter? Like if Jon somehow repairs the bracelet or something? Nevermind. Dumb idea. Great job.

Huh, I completely forgot about the story. You updated twice. Bravo, you have time even under Lancaster. Unlike me, who is just lazy. You might want to spellcheck it after you upload it and stuff. Some people here would grasp on the smallest thing and flame you on it. Well, see you on monday Oh wait...no...wait...yes, Tuesday lol.

wow intense. I liked it, if anything some of ur sentances are phrased a bit strange, nothing too bad u coul just read over it once or something. Otherwise great i liked it...Update soon

OH SHIT! I FORGOT A DISCLAIMER! Sorry peoples :(

Bah my parents are making me leave, *mumbles* jackasses, I'll read through it later. I think it takes a while to get yer pen name up on searchs. It took mine a while. In the end I had to add you to my favourites to find it. Did you go through my stories? O well the reviews apparently aren't up yet. O well, see you on tuesday, bye. o is thayet gonna commit suicide?