| Reviews for Heirloom |
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UE chapter 1 . 5/5/2005 omg i haven't read or thought about megami kouhosei in a lo~ng time. i hope you're doing well, read on your bio thing that you're going through some problems. my prayers to you, ne? as for the story, one lil typo: "strong him then"...but the rest is so delicate, so beautiful...this fic epitomizes tune. i love it. the recurring description of "worn" and "soft" was a lovely touch as well. anyways, until your next fic...take care ) |
Enola06 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005 Great begining! I love it, I like it when you compared the love for the objects we possessed and the love for a person, sometimes we love more the things we own than the people that surrounds us. Please update soon, don't let the story remain like this, I wait for your update. _later |
animechick13 chapter 1 . 3/26/2005 ...for me? WOW...thank you so much! A TUNE FIC! God, I love those...(and there are too few Tune fics...seeing as she's my favorite character...but everyone always overlooks her... T_T) BUT YAY! You wrote one..FOR ME! *glomps* thank you thank you THANK YOU! _ You captured her personality perfectly...and you even mentioned Ernest...W00t! *drools* Ernest...m...where was I? Oh yeah...long time no see...but that's ok. Real life is always more important than fanfics. I'm just glad you're back! *huggles* your devoted fan, animechick13 ;) |
Erendis Black chapter 1 . 3/26/2005 Well, I can honestly tell you that you captured Tune's very essence. The imagery and mood were perfect for her, and as I read on I felt like I could see things from her point of view. I'm very glad you wrote this, because it's true that Tune does get neglected a bit, in favour of the more vibrants characters. And the ending was exactly what I was expecting from Tune. How could she not love him? Lovely done. Whatever problems you're dealing with, I hope they'll be solved soon. Keep writing if it helps, and we'll wait for you. :) |