You know what?
Every two years or so I remember Noir and feel the urge to read some fanfiction. Today was one of those days, and I literally googled your story, by title.
I first read it when you posted it 15 years ago. My English wasn't as good back then, but I really enjoyed it :)
Anyway, read you again in two years I guess.

Here I am, 2019, reading this superb Noir fanfiction.

I first read this story about 9 Or 10 years ago. Honestly, it's my favorite Noir story... and one of the best and most memorable fanfics I've ever read. I recently watched the series again and found myself going back to the fanfiction archives to see if I could find it. Just as awesome a read as the first time all those years ago. Thank you for such a lovely gift. You made my day then... and now :)

Wow..

heading to "Eclipse" now *_*

nice story, he he to think that the best assassins cant stand ride

Great story, thanks for writing :D

Awesome!

Vicious words, so realistic.

Ooh, I love the obvious jealousy that Mirielle experiences when hearing of this first kiss.

The part about an Uncle that might kill you or you might kill being nice cracked me up; very in character for her I think.

So he's a kind of...spirit guide? It's good to have someone older to put her feelings in perspective, although once that can of worms is opened there's no going back.

Poor thing

That innocence is just so cute!

I like the way you clearly show Kirika's vulnerability and innocence.

Well the lemon in this chapter was very hot. Good writing. The flow had an "urgent" feel which really added.