Reviews for For the One I Love
invincibleironman chapter 20 . 10h
just started reading this and i am enthralled the whole story is amazing! you're doing great!
Lisa Roader chapter 20 . 7/8
Thanks for the new chapter. I really enjoyed the planning of serenity and Diamond. I am happy to see that the end is in sight.
Starlight016 chapter 19 . 11/12/2019
Please update soon, us you’re readers are getting restless
Guest chapter 19 . 10/12/2019
I love this story, it’s really bittersweet. I’ll be waiting the finale :)
Starlight016 chapter 19 . 10/9/2019
I love this story so much. I’m ready for a bittersweet ending
Lisa Roader chapter 18 . 11/25/2018
Wow! I can’t believe this came back, this had one of my favorite fan fic premesis and was also one of my favorite reads. Thanks for uploading a new chapter after all these years it made me really happy. I hope life goes good for you. And if worse comes to worst and you have to drop the story again (though I hope not) I’m still greatful.
XxElementalStormxX chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Rini?
beavtifvltragedy chapter 17 . 7/13/2015
My heart is breaking! You haven't posted in three months.. I love your story! It took me an incredibly short amount of time to read it and fall in love with it. The feels right now are just too much! Keep writing, your amazing at it!
Barbie chapter 11 . 4/14/2015
I really like the story thus far. Part of me wishes I watched the original sailor moon 100% to compare it, but with how well the story is told it also feels like I don't need to :). I'm also glad to see that something is finally happening with the time keys being so close to each other or at least that what it looks like to me at the end of the chapter
Komashin Sei chapter 17 . 4/2/2015
Great fun. You’ve been keeping the suspense up and the action going, so it has not gotten tiresome as some writers’ fics do, but rather I was so shocked to read your Author’s Note at the bottom saying you only expect there to be 1 or 2 more chapters — I can’t picture how it can wrap up in that amount of words but, more than that, I wish it would go on a lot longer! Perhaps as the author who’s been working on this fic for a long time, you’re looking forward to completing it, but as your reader, I strongly feel that it could go on for quite a while without losing any steam (for example, Seiya gets to the Moon Kingdom and saves Serenity from Dimande and then either Serenity does fall for Seiya and her mom goes ahead and sends her, her senshi, Endymion, and the cats to the future anyway without them needing to die/suicide before getting put into the sleep capsules, and then the readers could get some present-day Seiya/Usagi goodness for a few chapters before the end, OR Seiya gets to the Moon Kingdom and saves Serenity but finds out he doesn’t actually like Serenity personality-wise but rather prefers the klutzy dorkwad Usagi and needs to time jump to when she is in jr. high before she has met Mamoru and then she does fall for him [I would totally love to see what you would do with Seiya meeting her while she’s madly crushing on Motoki without Mamoru in the picture and enjoy an extended period of Seiya’s daily life then!], OR Seiya decides he doesn’t really care for Serenity and comes back to the present but Usagi realizes that the future can change and still be good, as in there doesn’t actually need to be Crystal Tokyo and her royal family all laid out as she thought, but rather an unknown future is a good thing). Anyway, your plot is so intriguing that I couldn’t help imagining up all sorts of ways it could play out! Well, I’m waiting with trepidation to see how you’re going to wrap up the story, but I will be so sorry to see it come to a close this “early” when I picture it being able to go on quite a ways with all of us readers on the edge of our seats.
I can’t tell you how excited I was to receive the notification that you updated “For the One I Love!” It is very hard to come by quality Seiya/Usagi fics and, of those, almost all of them were either completed long ago or abandoned. Yours is the first one I’ve favorited and followed and then actually got notified that a new chapter has appeared! You really made my day. I am so glad this fic didn’t peter out like a lot of people’s fics have ended up.
Thank you for such a great ride. This is honestly one of the small number of fics I have really enjoyed.
Komashin Sei chapter 14 . 4/2/2015
Your fic concept is so fantastic. I really love the idea of Seiya stealing the time key to jump to different times, going further and further back, in hopes of meeting Usagi before Mamoru/Endymion does (you know you’re writing a character in-character when he does something in your fic and I as the reader immediately think, “Yes, he would TOTALLY swipe the time key and do that! Why did I never think of that?!”). It’s creative, original, and yet fits completely into the actual canon.
It’s very refreshing to read your take, which is not like anything else I’ve seen in all the other Seiya/Usagi fics I’ve read. There are a number of ways I’ve seen authors maneuver to get Seiya and Usagi together, but it is rare to find something so unique, and something that sits within canon with everybody in character.
I’m very impressed. You win the award for having created the only OC I’ve ever seen in a fic who actually served a useful and interesting role: Hitomi. I totally did not see that coming, that she’d place Seiya into the other person’s shoes by asking, “Am I not good enough?” Woah, that was quite brilliant storytelling! It’s so easy to feel bad for Seiya in that rooftop scene and harder to understand how Usagi was feeling when he asked her, so to flip it on Seiya and him have to realize that he similarly can’t return someone’s feelings was a really nice plot point. And on top of that, you used Hitomi to get Seiya’s message to the senshi in the present day while he’s still in the past, which was very well done.
Komashin Sei chapter 5 . 4/2/2015
I am VERY impressed with how you worked Seiya into the R season so smoothly, without messing up anything that happened in the actual episodes. That takes an amazing attention to detail and skill that I haven’t seen in any other fics. I will admit, you did it so well that I actually went back and re-watched those R episodes to find out where you inserted him.
star lover 50 chapter 16 . 11/13/2014
wow this is the best story ever keep going i love it wish that i can be so good like you... :) 3
xXGlamorousGloraXx chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
Hmm...:)
xXGlamorousGloraXx chapter 7 . 10/2/2014
Ey...Seiya he now has revealed much more than before, but is that a good idea or bad idea?...well he did save Sailor Moon's life...
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