I am crying right now...its very well written and yes it wasn't fair at all...

That really struck the heart

. . Just a few seven hundred word but this is so beautiful.

Wow sad and bittersweet.

Interesting perspective of Kakashi's ANBU reasonings, or at least I found one. I like Kakashi's musings over his own death and the ending. The ending. It leaves the reader feeling empty. Which is good, because, angst. Enjoyed this one.

Just realized that I never reviewed this. So sorry it's taken me this long.

Anyway, I love this. It's rare that I find a story that captures the dynamics of Kakashi's complicated relationships with other people, but you've done it so well!

So lovely, especially with the understanding of the changes that the years will bring to Kakashi.

i literally started wimpering at the end

and now i'm all teary

WHY'D THIS HAVE TO BE GOOD!

*favs**sniffs*

Amazing. Amazing set-up for the ending. Turnabout, not winning them all; very subtle hints for the end. By laying down these cards, you pulled an absolutely solid finisher. I love this! Keep up with writing, you're doing exceedingly well!

- Legendary Swordsman

i really enjoyed this fanfic, even though it had such such a sad ending. i felt so bad for kakashi. but i love how you wrote about their interaction while playing shougi. Definitely something I would have expected to see from them.

Originally I thought this was a one-shot, but I noticed you dont have this marked as complete. So, just wondering, do you plan to continue this in the future? Because I'd love to read more. Either way is fine.

Sad and beautiful. I love your characterization :)

Kakashi being Kakashi is funny. Mostly how he's all glaring at Minato and Minato is just :D

T_T

sad. touching.

i've never thought about it, but it's true that Kakashi could've become an ANBU while Minato was Hokage...

Amazing.

yes i'm playing naruto