Again with "the Jew". What's up with that?

i really enjoyed it, i think you should write more for band of brothers

Your story honestly gives me a bit of the creeps. Before you think I'm some kind of homophobic moron, I'm not. But I think when you write stories like yours about people that really existed and whose friends and family still do, things change.

Do yourself a huge favor and stop writing Band of Brothers stories, at least the "romantic" bits. You're tresspassing the privacy of the real veterans(including those still around and able to tell the stories) and the situations you describe are not yours to toy with.

That was stoopid.:) You owe me ten minutes of my life.

Hmm, I made you get off your but? I wish this would work more often with some other people I know. But I am really happy you wrote another story!

I like this one; it has a brooding quality, it touches me (just like the men want to be touched;)). Webster can be that brooding, that dark, his mind goes deeper somehow than Liebgott's. I mean, that guy is dark as well, but quicker to recover or something... I also liked Webster referring to Literature (Poe, Hemingway). Great that you included that into the story, him being the Harvard man and all. The presence of cigarette somehow brings something edgy to the story. You know it is going to be finished soon, and therefore you are waiting in anticipation for that final draw; just like the conversation between the two guys seems to be building up towards a new argument, which doesn't happen as well. The climax of it not wanting to set alight the grass was a nice relief. Liebgott's worries over Webster are endearing as is his attempt to cheer up his friend by holding him. But you are right, Liebgott needs this as well. Beneath that cocky exterior there is someone else: Webster would say a man. And he is right. I loved the last exchange of F* yous they have. It seems so fitting. They both don't mean it as it sounds (at least if you don't read it in a slash kind of way), to them it means something else. However, they could never say those words, so this is nice code language. Very nice story. I am glad I made you write it (winks)! I liked it very much. As long as I seem to be able to persuade you into writing stories: I have been wondering what would happen if these two got caught in a firefight, and one of them got hurt? We have only seen them in moments of relative peace. As one other reviewer said; could you please write a more lenghty story on these two? Something a bit more angsty? Something which brings out the caring more explicitly?

Well, just see if you want to. Keep up the good work. All the best, C.

i liked your story so much, your such a good writer! I love your web/leibgott stories they are so great! I wish youd make a longer story about them itd be awesome!