that was really good, & sad. I know a website that gives u copy writes opn poems & u can win prizes. i was the semi-ffinalist in a nation wife contest. & my friend is now the poetry embassaer

I loved this fanfiction but *sigh* would you stop with the F word? Kinda ruined the fic for me, almost anyway.

Great job on this fic, hope you do more.

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InuNightWalker

That was REALLY good!

Hello,

All I can say is that was great. Very expressful, it really puts one in his shoes and makes you feel the pain that he's feeling. Great job! Keep up the good work!

~LoA

That was awesome! The flow of it made it nice. Not many people who try their hands at writting fanfiction based poetry are very good at it. And I'm assuming that you changed or added some words that weren't appropriate for school? I really liked it though! Keep up the good work!

GREAT SONG ! really good !

Well, FF.N isn't letting me log in, so I'll have to leave a review for you like this. Sorry about it taking so long for my to review your chapters lately...

I like these kind of things more than fluff, to tell you the truth. I mean, don't get me wrong; I love fluff. It's soo dang cute! But I like this.. genre more. It's deeper.

Plus, I like morbid poetry. Always have. I think it's because it's sort of... addicting to someone like me who's always cheerful, and has a good sense of empathy. But I also have no idea why I'm talking about me again.. ARGH!

I hope to see more of your chapters soon! And if I don't... um... I'll be really sad? Yeah! *cries for a few minutes and then recovers* I hope you're doing well!

Best of wishes!

Hugs,

Carmen

wow, that was a great poem. i does really fit with inuyasha. thank you

This is a really great out my fics sometime.