Reviews for John Lane
Maria Tsubasa chapter 52 . 4/21
Al fin lo terminé de leer, al principio no se notaban todos los cambios que habría con John en lugar de Jane pero conforme avanzó la trama se exploró todo lo que la serie no pudo o no permitió para no tocar tanto las características de los personajes, eso fue lo que más me gustó, todos avanzaron, todos tuvieron un final y fue muy lindo lo que les pasó a las Hermanas, en especial a Quin con Tom, ella mejoró bastante con su relación y me encantó más el ver que no se quedó solo Tom Como en la serie, fue la lectura más larga y agradable que he tenido en mucho tiempo en este mundo del fanfiction.
Maria Tsubasa chapter 43 . 4/20
Lo he disfrutado bastante hasta este punto, aún me sorprende lo de Tom y Quin y me sorprende aún más el ver que si es coherente con todo lo que les ha pasado, han sido cambios muy interesantes.
Maria Tsubasa chapter 27 . 4/11
Empecé el fic esperando llegar a este capítulo y ver como abordarian la situación de Tom, no esperaba que saliera con Quinn, fue muy divertido de leer.
Last-Lord-of-the-Wolves chapter 52 . 4/5/2018
This was one of the best Daria Fanfics I have read. And I have read Many.
James the Lesser chapter 2 . 9/2/2017
I read the whole thing before, but wanted to reread it again. unfortunately, there are so many things that make me cringe in this. Jane being a guy would definitely change her, but it wouldn't change Daria. And it wouldn't change her parents financial status. in the actual show they went every season and movie but no issues. I'm not sure what your justification is for them being so far behind on the house. and maybe you could still keep your John moves in with Daria but move it towards when the Jack guy shows up on the last episode of season 1. John gets punched, Helen Comes the check on him and Daria after hearing that he protected her. She asked him about his parents and in his concussion state he tells her the truth about how little they are there. this leads to Helen freaking out about it and then you can still keep your core concept. without having to change their entire financial status. even better, you could keep your part about how they had to take every job they could get and that's why they were never home. anyways, I still like the series and anything Daria longer than a few thousand words which is so hard to find these days.
Guest chapter 52 . 5/23/2017
I have to say I love this story. It is unique in that it keeps the tones and chericters cores while adding in elements to it that make me believe it's the natural progression. John's potrail is fantastic. I also enjoyed Daria and Quinn's personality progression. It is unique in that it captures the show but gives a depth to it that was not present in the show. I enjoyed it and thank you for your time and effort.- Kaosofnox
WinterValentine chapter 52 . 4/12/2017
This was an awesome fic and I totally fell in love with John lane. I ship them so hard now. This was nice little twist to read while taking breaks from binge watching Daria
Vanessa Masters chapter 11 . 9/11/2016
Awwww~ The last bit with Quinn.
HunterMoore chapter 52 . 12/2/2015
Absolutely amazing story, glad I finally got around to reading it.
rolygarcor chapter 15 . 10/4/2015
cool
antares valquiria chapter 52 . 11/27/2014
My native language is Spanish, so I apologize for grammatical errors. I love this story. I have spent the last few days reading it. Twice complete. And really, I love it.
So, thank you very much for writing this gem of a gender bender romantic. Direct to the list of my eternal favorites.
Kuriamo22 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Great story!
Vanessa Masters chapter 43 . 9/11/2013
XP Well, Quinn kissing Tom at the end was better than Daria. _
Vanessa Masters chapter 41 . 8/28/2013
I really like how you make Quinn improve. But also keep her still in character :D
Vanessa Masters chapter 39 . 7/5/2013
Wow. Mr. DeMartino certainly has changed...and I think for the Better :D _
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