For it to happen to Ami... wow. Short but sweet and definately enjoyable.

~Rikou

Wow, how has this only got one review? It's one of the most original, beautiful, touching and tragic fics I've read. You captured Ami's emotions really well. Keep up the brilliant writing!

i think it will be a bit sad if this little fic does not get reviewed because it's not a romance or it's not about usagi. but anyway. a good job trying to tackle the topic. you got the basic storyline, but i think it's missing description.. not only visual but movement as well. something that will make the story that is less script like. something that will build up the characterisation of the characters. the topic is supposedly to pull heartstrings. so description will be important. but beware of making it melodramatic. the comment on doctors are nice, as it puts the readers in their perspective. um.. what else, this is not a flame, i tried to make it constructive. do continue to write.