Gave me chills...I suddenly feel very sorry for Kagome. And I think it's very realistic, and I didn't see anything I'd want to change. Good job!

Sayonara

~~Silv~~

nice story, loved the angst, could have been a bit longer though. I HATE LATIN! It is fun , but

hard...

that's a great peom i loved it

This is really powerful. My hair was literally crackling at the hatred in the air. Now I am on my knees BEGGING you to write story aroung this, please!