I absolutely LOVED this one-shot... It was so innocent of 'the' Evil, Tearless, Invincible Angel Dust to just jump straight to conclusion. This reflected his fatherly heart and though Heinkel appeared all rough and tough; she too couldn't deny her feelings...So cute...

It was a nice story. But I have to ask which arthur wrote Field of Innocence? If you could just send me a reply so I could read it that would be really awesome. Thanks! It still remains an awesome story by the way! see ya!

Mighty Crouton,

I bow before your genius. Bloody brillant! 'Shall we visit your mother and baby sister?' I so want more. MORE. Please!

Er, I liked this, but I'm a History major, so, while I know how easy it is to get confused...Mary Queen of Scots was Elizabeth's cousin, Bloody Mary was her sister.

For me the best was Yumie, but in my opinion beginning was better then ending, which I hardly understood.

I've been meaning to read this for a while.

Your characterizations are lovely and wonderful. And just a little different than others. Your Anderson and Heinkel interaction is absolutely stunning too.

Great work.

~Cendri

I was shocked when you said that this was your first time to characterize Alex, Heinkel, and Yumiko, they were perfectly in character!

Good Job though!

Yet another fine story. Very good, I liked the ending. Not to say that I didn't like the beginning - far from it. Please keep writing!

I was just waiting for an AA/WH FanFic.

Good work!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

It's nice to see more poeple delve into the Iscariot characters. I've always liked Heinkel and I liked what you did with her character. Good work, I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow. I really enjoyed that. The characterizations were excellent. Anderson's perspective was wonderfully poignant, and Heinkel's was well-constructed as well.

I found Yumiko maybe a tad too mawkish, but that's just me.