omg **sob** that was the most touching story i think ive ever read you are so gifted at this you should inlist in a career or sumthing.

i loved it,every bit of it it was awesome and adorable

thank you for posting such a cute story,

Li

WAH! Poor Yuki! I don't really see Akito's motive for what he did though... looks like he's more for torture than killing in the books... but your story was very touching! Keep writing! XD

wow as much sadness as this story brings it also brings about the fact that it's not all because of one person if her friends hadn't givern her the strength tohru wouldn't have been as remarkable as everyone says thats just life we don't always win and that story is just an example of the hard life we all live wow it's good but you might wantt o work on the spelling errors a little

This kinda confused me a little, it made me sad but I didn't really understand what happened to Yuki. Other that I did like it, did Yuki kill himself or did Akito kill him by putting him in the box?

Actually, I really liked this story, and if this can be more than a one-shot, I'm a reader! This is very intriguing, the whole shoe-box thing...

Nice story. Don't worry about putting darker stories online - I've been reading Grimm too and you write really well, better than most FB stories I've read. Keep at it :) And update Grimm soon!

Hey, this is pretty good, I especially enjoyed the beginning. Yet, I thought the ending seemed a little rushed, it sort of confused me at first. Anyways overall very good!

me like a lot! poor yuki the mouse...

wow, this fanfic is really good ] The ending was a bit surprising, but i liked it anyway. I'm a little confused on what happened...did Yuki suicide? or did Akito kill him or what? o.O;

On the whole, I was rather impressed. There were a few grammatical errors, but unless has a personal editor those are expected. As a great fan of Furuba, I can say that you have kept the characters straight, and the thoughts seemed like thoughts that they would actually have. On the whole, I'm impressed.

wow, this fanfic is really good ] The ending was a bit surprising, but i liked it anyway. I'm a little confused on what happened...did Yuki suicide? or did Akito kill him or what? o.O;