I love this story. I've read it a lot of times, one of my faves!

Drop off a cliff

When I first read this story, here was my first reaction: WOW!

I was especially amazed at the fact that you kept both of them in character perfectly. Like, seriously, I can easily imagine all of this happening. And the way you described all of it was just perfect. So basically: I absolutely love this story. Great job!

This is so amazing. It's well written, it's attractive. The characters are lovely. It's incredibly wonderful.

DAMN! that wuz awesome!

That was really good, and very descriptive ]

I like it a lot!

That was hot...why do I find myself wishing a guy was here, and that I had some alcohol and ciggerettes [teehee after fuck smoking...rofl]...? lol I liked it, good job.

Wow, that was incredible! Now *I*'m all hot under the collar! That was really something!

really hot, im suddenly turned on and wishing a guy was here LOL

So I love this story.. alot. I really do. :)

You know what? In SEX! stories, people NEVER use condoms.

that made my limbs weak and my chest flutter. i've been wanting to read this for months, and now that i've seen ST, i'm so glad i did. yummy.

You had a strong monologue going, but the overuse of the f-word was a little too daunting to make this story more than a once-read. Try keeping it in dialogue and not in the narrative.

Very nice. I don't usally like Shocky fics but this one was really good.

Wow. That was hott.