This is absolutely lovely. You have the character voices down so well. I would have loved to see this as part of the Colonial Day episode, although I think being able to see inside Laura's head makes it even better than it could be in film. I completely believe that Kara would freak out Lee like that too. Excellent story!

Beautiful and very much in character. Plus I like the lee/kara tilt...I wish that episdoe had ended like this.

Liked it, liked it a lot, you have Kara nailed down quite nicely. The interplay between Laura and Kara works as well. The non verbal communication with Adama is of course always present and prefect.

I really enjoyed this story. I have just started watching and the Roslin/Adama relationship is one the most facinating aspects of the show. This was a great story. I think it was very in character. Great job!

Oh gods I loved this...I had not read it before somehow I missed it...that was just wonderful.

that was awesome!

See. I knew it was possible to write Laura without angst. This was wonderful. I love the bonding with Laura and Kara, and poor Lee... Very well written.

I like this very much!

Oh I loved it, loved, loved it! Sogood how you described the relationship b/t the characters, esp. that random parallel with Roslin and Kara. So cute! Great job!

*loves her Lyssie like WHOA for this* I like it! Because they're totally Mom and Dad innit. Plus. Kara being evil at Lee is always worth the price of admission. But mostly? I love you because it's MOM AND DAD. *snuggles*

Aw...kinda sad, but sweet, too. Liked how you described the relationships between all the characters. :)

More! I want more Roslin/Adama fluffy fics, please!

Aw, that was nice. You did a great job.

I don't usually like fluff, but - SQUEE. (Just to repeat what I already said over in LJ. You rock.)

ahh a nice story something that should happen more often! a little bite of humanity thats needed by everyone!