im amazed this was so low on the favorites list for crossovers it is honestly one of the best written fan fictions ive read it isnt action packed or drama centric but it holds so much great content that it easily surpasses many stories of battle and love thanks for the great read

I don't usually review or comment on older stories; but this was truly brilliant. I was grinning through the entire story!

I love your story. The sense of mystery is really intriguing, it makes me wonder about the bond that Souta and Kagome share and whether he was aware of her adventured or not. It also makes me think of whether he is Shippou or not. You're a great writer, because you make the readers think various things about the scenarios that you offer in every chapter. You are unpredictable and that is good; it's not fun to read something when you can easily decipher what event will happen next. Kudos to you for that! :) ... I also love how Souta never gave up on his sister and I am very curious on the bond they share and why it is so strong. :)

I loved the concept of this so so SO much!

This was fantastic!

I enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing! :)

Very intriguing. This story is as much a mystery to me as it seems to be to the fox!

Ms. is also used in professional situations, it implies a women who is not dependent on another (not a dependent child or wife) so using Miss or Mrs. can be an implied insult to an adult women (saying she can't take care of herself).

Thanks for writing.
K-

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That ending!

Shippo!
He always gets me man!
I need her to be with her baby!

Lovely

I LOVE IT! This is an amazing piece of work. Although it was slightly confusing for kawai little me in some places, you could really feel the emotion and understand that something much bigger than yourself was happening right in these virtual pages. I know that it's fiction, but it still feels exhilarating.
Atigatou Gozimas

Love ur story and hope make a sequel soon plz.

that was beautiful !

sometimes it felt too introspective for me but maybe it was just the way it was written with such confusing shifts in dialogue, diction, scene, etc. have you though about reviewing this and polishing it a bit more, not changing anything, just making it more readable?