...isn't this basically just what happened in the game, only with some of the characters' thoughts added in?

they'd be code tendrils, when Kite or a Phase uses Data Drain the tendrils of raw computer code are what reprogram the monster/player

for someone who doesn't totally understand what's going on in their own story you've got a pretty good one going right now!

I'd answer in French, but it'd be so bad you'd HAVE to laugh at me

Anyway, cool story so far, I wonder how this will turn out

aw! so cute and complicated!

*favorited*

Great ending! As for the sequel, I think you should leave the story as it is. I don't know if this review will mean anything considering it two years late. lol

Liked the sixth chapter

Grunties are...interesting I havent played .HACK in a long time but theyre interesting I'd have to say that when I first heard the noble gruntie talk I couldn't stop laughing because it surprised me at how he always said 'mon ami' every other sentence. Although they are quite useful when it comes to riding them through feilds and you get to avoid the monsters.

Since I beat the game I've been trying to raise diff. types of grunties to see their abilities. There are a lot of breeds!

I am without words. This is far most the best fanfic I've read!

I love how you deeply describe the characters and situation, it makes it a whole lot easier to follow whats going on.

I really enjoyed this chapter the most. I apologize on how late this review is I havent been on in a long while. Keep up the good work!

Well, it's really impressive, I have to say it doesn't feel like any difference between the others.

heck, your grammar 's better than mine.

Really like your stroy, funny too.

i think uve got a good idea going but its way 2 romantic, u make kite sound like an idiot(no offence). hack isnt supposed to be like tht. keep the romance but u should put in more action

*cough cough* I really like the story but this is a comment abou your profile .. Bear is like 40 years old *cough cough*.. But I agree Balmung is hot 3

My emailaddress is So send me a line. Foshizzle? Decent ending but one question, could they fell the kiss through the game or what?

Miki wasn't being too nice, was she? Usually I give the silent treatment for around ten seconds and then give up because I pretty much stink at being silent. Yeah, it wouldn't appear that way, would it?

is this the game because i love part 4 of it

I'd like a snappy little epilouge _ And I call them "data streams"

Thanks for mentioning me! _ Yay. I loved this fic.