Sad! Am down in the last chapter! I want more Yukiru scenes ! More more Yukiru romantic moments please! Though I have to admit you improve a little in correcting some words in their spelling but more effort and it will be perfect! Hey promise me you'll give this a happy ending of Yukiru okay? Can you do it?! :)) jah neh! Goodluck ! Update immediately please :)))

Uhmm.. I guess you need to work on your spelling dear :)) you know it's kinda get me dizzy fixing the spelling myself while reading anyways another tip :) even I don't write fanfics but I would love to be a keen observer of fanfics especially Yukiru fanfics :)) you should make your first chapter the most interesting one to keep your readers going curious to make them read more and leave the last chapter as the sweetest with happy ending :)

OMG please update soon i hope yuki and tohru get together there my favorite couple kyo and uo belong together! :D

love your story. cant wait for you to update.

sneaky and twisted

love da way u think

kool. lolz

Uhh, man, I almost cried just reading that you said you cried about the ending. That makes me sad, really sad. Does anyone die? Oh great, now I -really- can't wait for the next chapter, and the ones after that.. And.. it's still going to be Yukiru until the end, isn't it? Because I'll be sad if it isn't T.T (I'm too obsessed, I'm sorry heh)

I'm just wondering, how long is this story going to be?

Sorry for all the questions :D, Can't wait for the next chapter!

CELABRATE, UPDATE! ALRIGHT! Just keep trying. I understand.

Yay more Kyo and Tohru can't wait to read more

Wanna know what happens next

update soon *poke*

Hello! Good chapter, and I don't think you're a bad author... you just need more practice. I have one thing to say about technical and constructive criticisms for the chapter: and that is you should have some indication who is talking during some parts. Even though you bold and use italics sometimes that's not enough and we're left wondering who is speaking. Everyonce and awile during a conversation you should have some "said _" or something like that. I know it looks cool to just have dialogue, but we need to be reminded who's talking. remember that us readers are stupid, you are the one who has to lead us through the story. Plots and dialogue add to the journey, but you have to help us through so we don't get confused. kindof like indianna jones leading that little kid through to the temple of doom... Not really, that was a bad analogy... Just do remember that we need these tools as authors to lead readers through intricate and interesting stories. And it looks like yours is swiftly developing into something amazing. Remind us who's talking, 'kay? And wonderful chapter. All pauses between chappies is forgiven and understanded and I can't wait for the next one.

Good story! Please update soon!

Man, Motoko is such a witch. Nice update, I hope you update soon

Ah no! ~Sorry, but it's hard for me to have a Yukiru pairing when kyo's feeling that way...*niagra falls* So don't go into too much detail of his heartbreak if you're going to have any.~ Good chapter, please update asap!

please update soon see ya

Wait, it...stopped? KEEP GOING! I'm loving it a lot! You should have the Yuki Fan Club (I do NOT want to join them. They scare me! *shivers*)try to do something against Tohru.