Oh my goodness I loved this! Absolutely amazing job! :D

I knew Mokuba would win one day if he put his mind to it. However, I never expected his reaction to be like this...Although I could also see this happening too. Interesting the way you put it...although I don't think seto would lose that easily...and I think Mokuba would put up a fight and after a awhile he would eventually win. It's nice to see someone make Mokuba be more appreciated and treated like a good gamer when people make him look so underated. Great story.

This is sad for me to read :(

Hahaha! Take that little face-full of reality.

Very good, if you ever wanted to you could most likely make into a very good full story. *sniff* poor Mokuba :(

The ending was so sad...

Aww... (I think I'm over using this word!) poor Seto! and poor little mokie!

*dies* Oh my God... why had I not read this before? I guess I don't go too much out of my way to read fics about characters that I'm not as crazy about as others, but I've found myself reading some of your work about characters that I didn't think I would've cared to read about, and loving it. I realize that it's not so much about characters, it's about themes... feelings... and stuff. Anyway, Aside from me just realizing something there, I wanted to say that I really like this! Like everything of yours that I've read, it really leaves you with a certain feeling... Anyway, I'm going to have my sister read this as well (she's a huge Kaiba fan. And by "Kaiba" I mean pretty much all of them except Gozaburo). Why is everything you write so EPIC? Keep it up! _

woah, really sad and yet really...um...i can't find the word i'm lookin' for. Ah well, this was VERY good!

Poor Moki...he was hoping Seto was the same...I wish there was more to the story. You're a great writer! Keep going!

that's true, always used to believe my siblings and parents were perfect. the ending was a surprise and was quite sad. T_T Nicely written, thanks for taking the time to write it.

I must commend you on an amazing job done to portray the characters correctly. I've read this over and over, and only now did I absolutely feel I needed to review, because it was very well-written.

Thanks for providing readers an enjoyable experience!

*blinks*

Uhm... what was I missing here? *thinks for a while* Oh I get it... Kaiba's not his old self anymore so Mokuba's all upset about it ..that's why he sorta freaked out... oh...

Also the fact that this was quite a mild angsty fic compared to your other ones which include self-hatred, sibling death and attempted suicide.

Heehee .. like I'm not going to stop reading. It's currently 1.16 in the morning and am still awake. Once again, applause to the writing.

Wonderfully written. I enjoyed the suspense you maintained with this, as well as the bitter ending. To be honest, it caught me off guard, but I enjoyed it greatly. You really captured the emotions of both characters and developed them well. Great job.

~Rosemary Greene

Aw... *cries* *cries hander* W-w-WAH! Seriously, I'm crying badly here. Ra, you're good. This is so going on my favs page... I WANT MORE! Please keep up the beautiful work- I can't wait until your next piece!