I am in love with your stories! They're amazing! I know a good bit are on hold or completely dead but I do hope you will continue some of the Riddick and Fast and Furious stories! You're amazing!

I hope you get your inspiration back! I really hope you update soon! This is great!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEASE!

i really like this story it's pretty good, plzz update.

this story is great i can't wait to read the rest pls date

My fav part of this chapie!

'“You are afraid. All the information you guys have on him is his criminal record that we learned in History class in High School when we did that section on notable murderers. All you guys see is a psychopath, a rabid killing machine. But I know better. For god sakes I got into arguments with the teacher about him.”

“Did she really?” Tabitha asked Damian.

“Every day, pretty interesting to watch actually.” Damian said.

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! LMAO!

wow continuation, good job. i wonder where this could be going. you could actually make it a messed up romeo and juliet where jack and riddick get together but the jealousy from damien and tabby leads then to rat him out in fear that riddick'll take claudia away with him. lol now that'd be messed up.

anywhoo good luck and can't wait to see where this is going!

lamyka

hey r u ever going to update this? im just curious b/c i will stop caring to check to see if u had if u wont!

r u ever going to update this story i loved it so pplease update

You do a wonderful job of describing action and your dialogue is super. I'm adding you to my favorites list, enjoyed reading very much!

hey girl whens da rest cummin?

just wonderin' cause i love da story so keep up da great work

Please update! This is awesome!

O i am happy o so happy very very happy...dont think im happy do ya lol i love ur story imaganry friend ( hope i spelled that right) and i love this one more more more

Nice. Can't wait for future chapters :D Hope you're having just as much fun reading as I am writing.