In Chapter 20, you have Lilly referring to her encounter with James in her new nightgown as "totally snogging"...
To paraphrase Inigo Montoya from The Princess Bride ... You use that word. I do not think it means what you think it means.
What James and Lilly did in the story went well beyond "snogging". Contrary to popular American belief, snogging is just kissing- not full on lurve action. Full on kissing, yes- but a snog does not define any other sexual act.

Again - I don't imagine the author is still reading the comments, but I have another nit to pick...

Lilly would not be getting an F on anything - Hogwarts grades are:

O Outstanding
E Exceeds expectations
A Acceptable
P Poor
D Dreadful
T Troll

An F would be on an American (Muggle) scale
Note that O, E, and A are considered passing grades while P, D, and T are considered failing grades.

I realize this was written so long ago that the author probably doesn't check the comments any more, but...

In cannon, James was a chaser, not a seeker so Sirius would not have been responsible to watch for the snitch. The question is whether, since this story is rather AU, the author made that change deliberately or whether they, like may authors here, forgot that even though Harry played seeker, his father (James) played a different position.

this story is really great i would have liked if went further but all the same it's really goooooood

this story is really great i would have liked if went further but all the same it's really goooooood

I really liked the story. There were some editing issues but at the end of the day I enjoyed it immensely.

Another well written Lily & James story. Really thought it would have more to do with the job shadowing & her playing his nurse, though I enjoyed how it went. Ending seemed a little rushed, but at the same time cutting off after Peter's comment was perfect. Now to read more by you.

OHMYGOSHH I LOVEE this3

ooh someone i jelous haha

Aww, poor Peter! But siriusly ;D I almost gagged when Peter kissed her- that was GROSS! This story was great though, excellent job on portraying Wormy since we really don't get to see much of him in most LJ fics.

To where it bent beneath the undergrowth.

And took the other just as fair,

Because it was grassy and wanted to wear;

O-M-Gee, it's my favorite poem too! :D

Awesome story by the way! :]

i loved it. it was really cute...i especially love you disclaimer in the 1st chapter and i liked the titles of the chapters as well.

omg! I love it! soooo funny!

I like it.

Loved it! Awesome story :D