why? You didnt continue it.
I love your fic T.T

PLZ continue I luved it But Im a nami/Luffy fan,the only thing I didnt like wuz dat Luffy had another Gurlfriend

This is a cute and funny story. Please continue. Luffy and Nami forever.

*boos at Luffy* Luffy you are so mean! Nami loves you! T_T

HEY if its too be continued then continue already if ya ask me theres not enough luffy nami stories please continue

YAY! lUFFY/NAMI FAN! THANK YOU! BUT WHOEVER THIS RIN-SAN PERSON IS, FUCK HER! LUFFY/NAMI, AND FORGET THIS GIRL!

Oh...I really liked this fic!I love Luffy x Nami too...I wanna read the second part soon!

even though it was kinda hard to read because of the specing, i still loved it!it was really nice!_ update soon ok!i'll wait for it!and fix the spacing, the dialogue's should be separated to make a clearer emphasis ok!see ya soon!e-mail me!_~

Thank you for reviewing, guys. I'm really sorry for not putting is 'passages'. sorry! i've been writing fics in 'Furuba' but, i don't need to put in passages there, so i think i got used to it _, anyway, i'll improve in the next chapters, (I hope ;). Hope you will still read my story! Arigato! *bows*

signed,

Your neighborhood Gal!

Thanks! Ciao!

aaw CUTE! that was damn swet I really enjoyed it!

a really good advice I can give you is to make passages when you write. It's very annoying to read such a big amount of text in once. you get lost all the time

every time a new person says something shift line and everytime theres a passage with descripition also remember to make passagers cuz I really can't read it. it's taking forever!

but i'll be waiting for the next chapter cuz this was so great, but a question is how Ruffy can tell her he likes Rin-San and then go off and maybe fall for Nami when they kiss? and I don't quite understand that whole idea about Rin-San. She is his girlfriend, but then why does Ruffy wanna go kiss Nami if he'd might get the chance when he meets Rin-San

sry to swell in it in that way it's no big deal really! I just wanted to ask you if there was something I had gotten completely wrong

remember - be happy!

I'd like to read this, but the lack of carriage returns makes it incredibly hard to tell what's going on. Every time someone speaks, there should be a return to a new line to distinguish who's speaking. Please correct it? _

Thank the lord this is not another ZoroxNami fanfic!

Too many Zoro x Nami fanfics been coming out!

But the only problem with the fanfic is that each paragraph is really hard to read, so, could you please at least start a new paragraph each time the characters start a new sentance? Or at least make the paragraphs shorter?

I like the way you are going with the story, it is very cool! And I laughed a bit in the good humor! _