That was sad...

Poor Envy,he only renember bad things.

I liked far too much the way you made it,it is a sad,yet powerful image,I could almost hear the sound of the music box while reading this,sweet,beautiful and soft,almost like a lullaby echoing in the old room,I could feel everything you wrote,like I was there,watching,hidden by the shadows.

Please,keep writing,I will thank you if you do it.

Karenin

I believe that Envy's intention of bringing Ed to his old room is so someone else besides himself knows about the human he once was and maybe edward would be able to live for the memory of his half-brother since they are similar in so many ways. I love the story but I don't think ed has the right to critisize a homunculus for wanting to feel human. I mean, that would be like insulting Lust or even Sloth who he created. Izumi was able to accept her child even if he was a homunculus so I don't think it should be too hard to accept the homunculus who was your brother, even if he is a just tries to act tough because he really is in soo much pain and plus, Envy had been through 400 years worth of it and at least ed had his memories and a lot of good ones. The only time ed will be able to understand the homunculi is when he becomes one.

i love it! don't understand the title though, i adore ed & envy brother fics!

This was strange but it had a surel feel about it. It was really good. But Ed could have been a bit nicer about it. Wrath ended up with Izumi and all in the movie. She accepted him as her child.

im reviewing!

yayayyayaya so cool

It makes you wonder...Maybe he was trying to see if Edward was anything like himself when he ysed to be human. Maybe he was looking for some flicker of who he was before he died in Edward, after all, they are half-brothers. Nery neat, very interesting. I liked it.

I loved the atmosphere and the amount of detail in this fic. Besides, the characterization was very well done.

Great job.

Wow! I love this fanfic. It's awesome, but you should keep writing it .

wow that was so good

omg this is such a good story! i dont know too much details of the story just partial plot, but I loved this _ envy is my fav! you have to write more!

coolness! i liked it!

-"Mm," responded, rulling his hand away, and turning, "So this was..."-

Who responded? XD I figured it out by reading the next line, but I figured I should point it out.

Wow, thank you so much for this. I've been reading fanfics for most of the night, and this is the only one that's been truly good. XD

Both Envy and Ed seem very in character. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Envy reading this, but that might just be because I'm a sucker for Envy angst.

I haven't put much thought into why exactly he died, but mercury poisoning is rather appealing.

Self-centred and jealous. That's Envy all right. And it's just like Ed to see how far exactly he can push the sin.

I found the whole story rather touching. 3 Thank you for writing it.

Lovely. Simply lovely. I wish i could write things like that...

Pardon me if anything here is messed up i have to type with one hand.