My god you’re fucking your story so badly it’s barely readable

Greengrass & Bones are good choices to pair with Harry!

JimS

That abduction was so forced. I mean, come on, since when do inanimate objects activate portkeys? And you’ve never stated that he needs a wand to go to Black Manor. I feel like every time you have Harry in a combat situation you undermine his abilities, which makes me question how you’re going to have him suddenly come out on top in a fight with Voldemort. I like the idea of this story, though it doesn’t always seem like you have a plan for each chapter.

Enjoyed it. Thought my question about the wand did not get answered in the remaining chapters...

Did Harry get his new wand back, his old one, or both? Because it was made a point that his wand (new one) was taken with the portkey, but there was no indication if that was the same wand he got from the bedside table when he woke up.

I’m confused that he could not teleport to the hideaway...

Have you made the 3 story

Another excellent edition to the series! Spelling errors galore though.

Love this story!

Is next one out yet

I hope to read the next installment of this series! It is so good. Faithful readers await!

Can a leopard change its spots?

I would think a thestral is a bit large to be in the shack tunnel. The founders out and about for their first view of the new world, as rotten as it is

What an overbearing arse! How dare he! Sirius recovered rather quickly from what, 2 weeks about being tortured! Nice frames.

Bad gifts for Ginny, after reading the gifts for others. Nothing for the twins or the Weasleys? You know they would have things for Harry