Write more! I AM DYING FOR IT.

Well finish it

This is really wonderful. I like and I hope you update. Your ideas are good.

:)

It is so beautiful! please, do write the rest! )))

It is a beautiful begining! I would love to see the rest of your story! Please, don't kill Achilles in the end! )))

good ideas. but i think you could lengthen the speech and have less of the change from achilles to briseis.

Wow it's wonderful to dug Briseis contradictive feeling when Achilles killed her beloved cousin! Please continue it! It's so thrilling! Please

please,please,please write another one

Great but don't kill him .Make them fall in love to read again

It's great! Definetly continue! I was getting so sick of 'Briseis wekling' stories. Especially after Hector's death. Go for it!

Tsuki no Yasha

keep going...

Hurry UP! Update! Update! I love this fic. Brilliantly written!

This seems good so far. I like the invented dialouge, you've done a nice job. Bad Achilles! "Then why don’t you go to your precious prince. He’s actually outside" Not nice!

NIce job. I hope I like the rest as much as this!

hi...you HAVE TO FINISH this fiction...i am curious to see where it is going...i have many troy fictions but i like the ones which the authors change details and events like you did..it makes it more interesting than just reading a fiction which is pretty much the script of the movie...keep up the good work and keep briseis and achilles together. thnx

i love this story! plez update soon