Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Very intense! Wonderful!

oh;p...that was nice...I have read that before but I can now leave a review!..;pHope you write more..

Oh, this is so great :)

A great idea, great writing, great insights. I LOVE IT! Really good job done here :)

That was so nice and sweet and i need to know more.

please please please write a follow up. It's, like, really good and I LOVED it!

I like this ending: it's different and not typical at all, but still angsty in its own subtle way.

Just had to tell you that I really loved this. Definitely my favorite MacStella story that I have read thus far. I hope that you write more very soon!

I like this story very much, and I would love for you to continue it, although I do understand when muses decide to go on vacation. ;)

-Avi

I think that you should write a follow-up to this. It would be nice to see what happens next.