Funny you let Sara quote what Grissom had to say about the evidence: "Concentrate on what doesn't lie. The evidence," he said. Well, all I can say is all the evidences shows Grissom has never been involved with Greg. I have lots of gay friends, so don't jump up and accuse me of being homophobic. It's just I like Grissom and Greg too much, and I 'd like them for what they are. Go twist your own original characters anyway you want. Don't touch Greg, or Grussom.

Lovely story. Good work.

Jesus, Kate, you rock so much. I've told you I love this fic, right? It almost makes me feel bad for Sara.

...almost.

(And as a side note, I just realized I hadn't added you to my favorite authors list over here. How could've I committed such an oversight?)

Ahh, teaching seventh graders how to write fanfiction. If I had had a class like that, well, maybe I would have gotten a more-than-one-page fic actually finished. So, Sara has a gaydar. Well, the actual definition in the dictionary says that gaydar is how *gay* people identify each other, so who does she have? Cath? (I'd go on and list people in that coolio way you did, but I can't think of any other CSI women). Anyway, good once again.

Alexandria

As a fellow teacher of teenagers with a possibly - nay, probably - unhealthy obsession with slash, you have my sympathies and and complete whole-hearted support. I laughed until I snorted.

Oh... cool! Greg/Gil right? I mean, why was Greg entering Gil's office, then? :D

Keep up the good work!

That was great. _

Not a huge fan of slash but you write so well!

Bwah, nicely done! I could almost hear Sara actually saying those words and see Grissom's articulate facial expressions. As a bonus, I sporfled out loud a few times during the proceedings. ;)

Found this through the Gil loves Greg community. You'll teach your seventh-graders grammar and writing just fine, if this story is any clue as to what you know about your writing. Very enjoyable! :D

Awesome Sara.

Granted, I'm not a Sara *fan*, but still.

LOL! Yet another great one.