i like this chapter! update soon! and yes you're right, if Ritsu were here he'd be almost 1 year old. well update soon! (i think i said that already)

I love your story! Its brilliant and I also love your idea, I havent seen any fics with this idea around as most stories have copies yours seems most original! Update soon!

o Yay for fam-tastic updates! I have no idea what to ramble on about, but I am obvliged to do so because of your kindness in reviewing all my stories with extra-long reviews, so therefore I shall go into some rant or other until something makes sentences. Whether they are coherent or not, that's up to you to decide!

...and Ren hit Kureno. That's unhappiness in a stick of gum. She must be stoned. Not high stoned, but rocks of stone stoned. Or maybe, because she also made Ritsu cry, he'll come at her with bananas only fit for a grandmother's banana bread. That's justice. I assume that the gray-haired someone is Mr. What's-Her-Face. Hmm... what *was* his face? Kazuma? That sounds right. Anyhow, that's probably the only grey-haired person that's around at this point in time, and that's that age. Maybe he was there on behalf of Ritsu, but having squishy bananas in one's pants pockets leads to awkward questions. Especially when you're ten.

Ah, the cuteness of youth. Akito will not stay child-like cute. But we all know what I think of Akito, no matter what. To prevent any pronoun issues, I will always call Akito by name, and not by pronoun. It saves all of us a few extra brian cells we need for doing stuff with. Rubbing together to make some fire, possibly, if there's enough of them there before reading the story but reading it shall not cause any harm except on various people IN MY HEAD! Ren is not a happy camper in the box in the closet buried in the ground under the sea. The box is tiny, and not human shaped, and it has just a dash of pepper to make things interesting.

No air holes either.

But who needs air holes who isn't Ren?

I heart your characterization of everyone, even Ren, and especially Kureno & Akito. They're all right on the button, at least I think so, and anyone who says otherwise will have to answer to me, and I can type for an awfully long time if I have the right keyboard. They will recieve the blockable ba-leetable flame of DOOM! How's that for a random tangent? My goal is to make this an exceptionally long review, because how else can I make it up to you, my good man?

Enola thinks so too. She preens for goodwill of all mankind! Glory of glories! *swings fists around a la Daisuke, happening to thwack newborn Yuki* Erm... Die, Yuki! *twirls off somewhere*

Wilson (For lack of someone better, and I dare you to find some): ...

*twirls back in* Look, Dr. Wilson's here. I hope he's not here for Yuki. Or maybe I do. Just don't treat him and all is good. Good oncologist, good... *purrs* What did you think of the story?

Wilson: *looks very much like he wants to escape... somehow...* Good... considering I don't understand the context...

Excellent. See? He likes it too. And he doesn't even know what anime is probably. That's ok, though. We all still love him muchly. I'm starting to turn into the beginning of some of your stories with random appearances of characters, only it's just one, and le looks like he doesn't want to be here. Maybe we could give him a golden card/ticket thing and send him off into the world of Fruits Basket and he could replace Hatori, and all would be fam. Hatori's a stupid doctor. Even Cameron would be better. We could just sneak Hatori out the back and cart in Wilson, and incorporate him into the Mabudachi Trio. Oh, how Ayame would love that so. We'd be taking Someone-Whose-Name-Shall-Be-Changed-To-Protect-The-Innocent's best friend though... hm... Can we call him Jeff? I recently named my mannequin Jeff. Well, Super Jeff, actually. And I recently bought a tiny mannequin, and he's Teeny Weeny Super Jeff, also known as Jeff Boy.

But yes. Non-Mannequin Jeff could replace someone, and keep everyone happy. But who...?

Yuki! Of course! That's so much better. Ayame would be very happy indeed. Super Jeff and the Oncologist Boy Wonder? We shall have a fiesta, and then siesta, but then we will fiesta again!

Wilson: ...

This is getting a little too strange for my eyes and my feet to take, so I shall take Wilson elsewhere.

All spellnig erorrs are intentionall, all grammer faltes for efecting. all ploty holse for stimalating are inmangination.

I am prefectly figth. Sincerely,

Your most devoted Brian Cell.

Very interesting... and it's obviously better than any of my fics _. I love it! But now I have to spoil the moment and criticize your fic in a constructive manner.

Well the one thing I want to point out that REALLY bothered me was when you called Ayame blonde. Ayame has silver hair... you can check the anime for proof... and um the other inaccurate stuff aren't really important since this is after all fanfiction... and um Ritsu was born during the time. He was 1 year old or younger. It was explained my Kureno when he said he had the dream of a little girl (Akito) coming into their lives. And I don't think Shigure's parents are very fond of him. (Read chapter 98 for more details)... But those facts aren't SO important since like I sad, this is Fanfiction. But otherwise this fic is awesome..UPDATE SOON

XD! Funny smells. I love it. Smells are always funny. As in laughing funny. Only some are acually funny smells as in... '...what's that smell?' But normally dogs like funny smells. If it smells a lot, roll in it. That's the dg philosophy. They don't really have the concept of a 'bad' smell, just 'different' smell.

And le pink! And le entrance of le Ayame de Magestique! I can only imagine how much more random he was when he was younger- 'that song was by korn? The indians call it maiz. Another famous indian was Crazy Horse, but no horse has a for sure chanse of winning the Derby.' And on it goes like that. AND TINY OLD MEN! HAHA! That's just so great. It makes me think of that juice commercial or whatever it was where the guy finds the leprocon (...sp?) in his pocket and it dances. Now there are the images of Akito getting squished by a huge pot of gold.

And I'll bet smiling pained her. It pains me too.

But AW... even evil people are cute when they're babies. They have not yet the power within them to be corrupted or let go of things. And everyone acted all cute around baby Akito too~

to the early Mabudatchi Trio at work, playing house with Shigure as the crazy uncle, and the pointless argument that ensues XD Shigure may not have a million babies yet, but I'm sure that, if not for the curse, he'd be busy enough. And stupid Hatori being the stupid baby is good enough for me. In real life, babies are cute, but in little-kid-house-games, they're the worst role evar! Even though we all love Aaya, secretly we know that Shigure has the best role. Still... Ayame is more likely to marry Hatori than Shigure...

But! I believe that shall be all for now. Many things to do and see, and this has become a review to make up for some things that don't come to mind right now. I'm taking a really long time to write it though. You read and reviewed my story lickedy-split. Ah well. I will draw this to a close, but...

I'LL GET YOU NEXT TIME GADGET!

Yay! Another fam-tastic chapter. All is fam. Anyhow, love how Ren is portrayed, how right from the very beginning she insists that Akito must be a boy, because we all know about Akki's little secret, unless we don't. But whatever. All hail Akureno, or Kurekito, or whichever, because both are equally as good.

As for my vote... I say MABUDACHI all the way. Especially Ayame, because there's no member of the Sohma family that lives with just one tiny little angst thingy such as having your younger brother not like you. More on that next time you write a chaptire!

Lovies!

lol this is fanfiction! you don't have to be accurate! fanfiction means ur greatest fantasies comes to life through your most favorite stories, books, anime, movies, and etc! anyways LOVED chaoter 2, i love it i love it! o i just can't wait till chapter 3!

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! WHO CARES IF ONLY A FEW PEOPLE REVIEW! WHAT ABOUT ME? DON'T BE DISENCOURAGED! JUST UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY

That was breathtaking. I absolutely adore Kureno and Akito. Lovely, lovely fic.

Ohh~ Nice Akito entrance there. You're so good at this, man. I want more of this one, obviously. This is so going into my C2 group D