aww cute, but i dont understand. sumthing happened to gaby? and amou feels guilty about it? and then he doesnt want the same fate for kaname? maybe?

I think this story is quite cute, I like this paiting, though barely anyone writes about it... The again, I like all pairings that have my Tsukasa-chan in them... Aside from that, are you going to continue this or is it just one chapter? This is a good ending, though I think you could tunr this into a great multi-chaptered (Is that a word?) story... Anyways, great story!

Hm... interesting pairing.

lol great story...i love this pairing...its cute. besides the gabrielxtsukasa pairing, this is my fav. write more please.

E! OMG, I love it so much~! They're not the most popular couple, butthey're so cute together! Love it!

Aaw...I already felt bad enough for Tsu-chan, now this? Haha, I kid, but that was really sweet.

XD I love unusual pairings.

I like it. Very cutsey. Write more

Yay, you finished it! I love it, yay for unorthodox couples .

Wow, you're a fantastic writer It sounded so poetic at parts...really nifty And sweet. I was fun to read... I hope to see more stuff by ya

That was cute! I like it! _

Okay, different, but not bad at all :)

Two months and fifteen days? Wow. ;; But, hey, it was good! I liked it. And other than the few small typos (damn them!), everything was perfect. You should consider a second chapter, because you could really expand on the plotline you have going. (Unless that is your intention in the first place?)

Anyway, good job, Kyone-chan! I do hope to have my KuroGabriel fic done soon. .~

*kudos for you*

~mentaru (aka Miyouko, duh)

'lo! It's Mizure!

WAI! It's...so...cute!

I was hesitant...cause of the pairing (TomoxTsuka 4 ever!)...but it was CUTE! And the parts with Gabriel were sad, but cute!

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...Why are they together at 3 in the morning?...

GAH! IT'S BURNED INTO MY EYES NOW!