okay, um. its a good story, but you didnt build up rebecca and billy's relationship at all. it was just fightzombies,savesister,fightmorezombies, and them BOOM! oh yeah, i love rebecca! it was soo out of the blue that someone who hasnt played the game would have been like, "what the hell? you mean they were a couple?" you need to build up relationships so you dont just hit the readers in the face like a wet fish...haha, i love that analogy, anyway back on topic. you have good fighting and character scenes. just remember that if you going to have two characters fall in love, you have to show it over a period of time or no one will get it.

this was an overall great story. i loved it you should make another. with everybody in this one and make it a countinuation of this one and have the ex stars find out that wesker had a son and is going to start the umbrella corp again and name the story

THE EVIL NEVER ENDS

that would kick ass i would be the first to read it

well im going to read some of your other storys and i hope there as good as this

this is a really good chapter its kinda funny to because they need sun light but there is none. oh and one more thing if there under ground how can there be windows to see out side... unless their on the ceiling

what kinda ending was that? nah im just kidding lol I loved it! It was so good. R U gonna make a new story? Hope so!

-Claire ur #1 fan.

oh and thanks to you and another authoress i was inspired deeply by your work. Thats why I became an authoress here!

this story is awsome y would anyone want to flame it

i just started yuour fic and its really good so far im going to keep reading

This was an ending. Lol. I like laughed and thought whoa this could get interesting but then youc ut it off. Lol. P Very cute

yay ive been waiting so long for you to update!Oh and im so glad you did! keep on writin' and plz pl plz update soon!

-claire

xD That was funny. Those last lines were so funny I couldn't laugh out loud or risk waking up my family. Not half assed. I'll email you ideasx...or wait...didn't I already? -raises an eyebrow- Anyways continue! This is definitely a greatest hit!

Holy shit that was good not better but good. I wonder...are the hunters coming and more advanced so they could see in the dark and kill everyone even Milat and Wesker? Jesus so many possibilities.

This story is great but you need to divide the characters to insight more fear

great u decided to make becca and billy a coiple arigato fir that will u make micheal and lillie a couple plz say so sayonara

Awesome 3rd chapter. Underground airport...? Interesting...CONTINUE!

LMFAO! I WAS LAUGHING THE WHOLE WAY! EXCELLENT! KICK THAT MOTHER FUCKERS ASS ALL OF YOU!

another great chapter plz make a micheal/lillie pairing coz there both teenagers and there bove from mariville