guy! What happens next?

WE. LOVED IT'S

Kinda nice. Straight to the point writing, not alot of needless flavoring. I liked it.

Awesome story. I always hoped someon would write a story like this. Good job. It's definately in my faves.

*girlish scream* Oh! That is so cute! I was scared you might kill one of them off! And they're remarkably in character, which is sometimes so hard to do with dramas! It made me happy! No forcing of the emotions at all!

Aw. It's so sweet.

This was pretty good. Ron called Kim on the point of not saying it just because he said it. Keep up the good work. Just a note. Try and put a line between the lines of conversation. Makes it easier to read.