| Reviews for The Targets |
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Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2009 Um, not to be rude, but using a description like "brown haired boy" when there are four boys with brown hair involved in the sceen (though granted one is gagged, and one is both arguably not directly in the sceen and could be considered a dark blond if you wished) is a bit confusing. "Dark haired boy" a bit later is worse, as all of the gundam boys apart from Quatre have dark hair. Sorry to nitpick, but overuse of confusing descriptions is one of my pet peeves. _; |
Amarin Rose chapter 15 . 5/19/2005 I know as much about Slayers as I do about Wiess Kruz - which is to say, not much. But I think I would enjoy reading the sequel as much as I have enjoyed reading this. I jsut hope there is less blood... *shudder* |
Amarin Rose chapter 13 . 5/19/2005 Normally if anyone has MPD its Une (Lady/Colonel) or Duo (Duo/Shinigami). But Quatre... Interesting concept; fits very well with canon of the show and this fic. |
Amarin Rose chapter 11 . 5/19/2005 *snerk* I absolutely loved that whole scene with Wufei, Manx, and Wufei's engagement to Sally. Funny, but by ending on a solemn note, they are both reminders of life and what they are fighting for. |
Amarin Rose chapter 9 . 5/19/2005 /Nagi found it ironic how even in the future, there would still be people like WeiB. Even in the future there would still be people who gave up everything to kill and protect like WeiB./ Nagi *should* be thinking about how good always triumphs over evil. Instead he's trying to destory the world. Why is it evil villains always want to do that? Either that, or take *over* the world... |
Kaitosouta chapter 1 . 11/10/2004 I like this a lot...! |
koriaena chapter 15 . 8/25/2004 pretty cool story! even though i know practically nothing about weiss! _ |
Isarandel chapter 15 . 5/25/2004 a really wonderful and interesting story. i love the parts where there is the voices from the past and of course Quatre's thoughts. it grabs more of my attention and makes me wanna read it till the end. very good story.:) |
child of silence chapter 15 . 9/23/2003 O THAT WAS AWOME! YOU KICK A$$! |
Wind Wanderer chapter 15 . 8/17/2003 wow, this was an awsome story. i've read it three times and it is still good. you did an awome job on this |
Yue Kisaragi chapter 15 . 8/11/2003 Hey great fic! I'm going to read the sequal now Keep up the good writing! |
Quatre Winner chapter 15 . 7/4/2003 Oh my god, that was SO good! You could write a Yu-Gi-Oh crossover with Quatre's dark half! In fact, if you don't mind, I will! I wish I could write something this good...I haven't seen WeiB but I wanna! I wish you could write another gw/weib crossover. You did a very good job with this one. A lot of detail. And you're not the only crazy one. I would like to put my fav characters through hell, but I can't make it come out right. *sigh* Just thought you should know that this is good! Well, you wrote it, so already know. *sweatdrops. Goes off to torment a certain braided baka* |
Yukai O Kitsune chapter 15 . 6/6/2003 o GREAT FIC! |
Liquid Green chapter 15 . 1/5/2003 I liked this story a lot. The characters were able to pair off a little too conveniently, perhaps, but still very enjoyable. |
MJ chapter 15 . 4/5/2002 Wonderful. Very well written. I am a really big Weiss Kreuz fan and I haven't really been into Gundam Wing. Well, actually I knew nothing about Gundam Wing, until I read this Fic. Then I really went all out trying to find information on Gundam Wing. Again, this a is a very well written fic. |