that was a good chapter :) i like this story, its really good!

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this! It is so deliciously great! I have to inform you that you have a incredible talent for nailing the characters dead on(well as near as I can tell anyways:). Their inner dialogue, their converstaions everything about them is perfect. Amazing. And alas, you have to decided to torure us by NEVER updating it! Why... Either way I commend you for your obvious writing and perception skills. If you never write again, I will always remeber this story as the perfect story that never was... In short, Love it, Love you:)

Hi i read your story there's a long time and there's no end but your story is very very good and I love it!

Do you think you will write an end?

If you're OK can you answer me at

Thank you and sorry for any mistakes I'm French

That was one of the best NCIS fanfics I have ever read! And trust me, I've read a lot! I'm totally obsessed with NCIS and am a huge Tate shipper! Those intimate scenes with Kate and Tony were electric - tingling with sexual tension and bucketloads of the chemisrty we all know we love to see. Wow. Most of the Tate fics I've read are all fluffy, with a bit of teasing and mucking around, then whammo! They're in bed! Well your story had the chemistry and flirting that made it totally perfect! Are you going to do more chapeters? I can't wait!

It's really, really good!

Keep the next chapters coming!

Can't wait to see the words "Blah, chapter 4 done..."

Hm...

Good Story, wut is the tate site called? KATE AND TONY 4EVA!

i love this story i hope you can update soon.

Fabulous! I can't wait for an update! n.n I love the interaction between Tony and Kate. It's so much like them, it's like I'm reading an episode of the show. Keep up the great work.

Well I don't watch the show (*ducks* Yet! Yet!) but you know I totally love this. I'd believe you if you told me these are your own characters, which says a lot. This story has a great flow, solid plot, and beautiful use of imagery, not to mention MUCH Tony/Kate goodness (who I am already loving. Damn you! :-p). You're a wonderful writer, Andy, I am SO proud. MUAH! Keep going!

awesome possome!happy days happy writing!

~Sakura

LoL! this is really good! yes i do see your logic! lol! i love this bit:

"I knew it!" He said in a yell of triumph as that previous grin was back on. "I knew that somewhere inside Caitlin Todd there was a room for Anthony DiNozzo." And as soon as his words were out Kate swirled around to face him just as Gibbs did the same and she wasn't able to stop the blushing from creeping up her neck and cheeks.

"Tony!"

"What?" He was so used to his sexual innuendos and horny attitude and speak that he didn't notice the double meaning of his words until it was too late -and after he gave it a little thought- and he too joined Kate on the blushing. "Hey! I didn't mean it like that! I swear!"

"That means you two on good terms again?" Gibbs stared at Tony but didn't really give Tony time to answer, for, well he didn't really want one, as he kept on talking. "Good job, DiNozzo. And next time think before acting. It would be nice now and then to keep a hold of your big mouth."

"Ah... Sure thing, Boss." He replied, knowing fully well that disagreeing with Gibbs wasn't a good thing. As he found his way to his desk and sat, he exchanged a look with Kate and they both chuckled.

They were back to normal.

lol! dirty dirty Tony! lol! and i love this bit:

"Sure, Boss" Tony nodded, sounding almost relieved he didn't get a scold. Funny, Gibbs though, was Tony finally growing up and realizing that annoying teenager attitude of his? As he caught sight of a paperclip softly flying on Kate's direction, landing on her hair, Gibbs sighed; not exactly he had to admit. Kate immediately reached for the paperclip and gave Tony one of her 'Grow-up-DiNozzo' looks, which only earned her a toothy grin from Tony.

Gibbs simply sighed. There was nothing he could do about this High School situation he got to go through every day. As much as he hated to think about it, he had to admit that it was only a matter of time until either Tony and Kate would kill each other -most likely Kate shooting Tony- or they would end up in bed, releasing all the tension built up for two years. He wasn't sure which one he would rather have because losing one of his agents didn't seem like a good idea -even though having no childish attitudes from Tony sounded nice- and neither sounded good them in a relationship because or Tony would end up hurting Kate, or things would be so serious Gibbs would have to quit before watching such sweet endearments from them, which he was sure would happen. Tony being the flirty he was and Kate being the old-fashioned chick she was would end up in office scenes Gibbs would rather not know.

"Let's go." He said and as he walked to the elevator, he caught a glance of Kate making a face to Tony as they passed him.

lol! hmm not too sure which i'd rather see, Kate shooting Tony, Kate and Tony sleeping with each other or Gibbs quitting because of Tony and Kate's loving relationship... lol! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happen next!

Love Megan

SWEET! Very well done!

Its great, but we want more