:)

I loved that! That was really nice. Most people, especially java junkies really want the sex and the intimacy. I haven't read any reviews for this story, but I'm pretty sure that most are begging for an update of some kind. Nothing wrong with that, but I, for one, am so very content reading something like this. So simple and very fulfilling in its simplicity. This is just something that brings a smile to my face, and makes me remember why it was that I fell in love with these two characters. Why is it that I am just reading something by you? We're 2 for 2 here. On I go...

I know it's been like... almost a year since you wrote this, but I wanted to review. I was going to review after the first story I read of yours, but I was uttered speechless... so I moved on to read another of your stories. Before I knew it, I had read all of them. You're an extremely talented writer. Whitty and greatt with the details... even your author's notes are funny... You come up with great ideas too. great job! I have much more to say, but I don't want to bore you. You know you're good. That's how you do it.

that was really cute, insanely cute

this story is really good. sorry im not hyper and dont feel like talking

i love it, but i want more,

i know i'm some stranger, but here i'll write a little if i sound rude.

luke: so what brought this on?

lorelai: i just feel, i just feel, honestly i feel wonderful, amazing, can't describe it

luke:must be wonderful to feel that way

lorelai: it is, but i can't always say that, some of what i said is a blatant lie, yes i feel great, but i still feel a hole

luke: really (looking amused almost cocky)

lorelai:(laughing, more gigleing) stop

luke: fine, so go on

lorelai: i've almost always been so independant, you know facing my problems by myself, but i relized this morning, whats so bad about depending on a person once awile

luke: getting hurt, and getting disapointed when they arn't as trustworthy as u believe

lorelai: u really know how to bring a person down

luke: sorry i just have to many failed attempts at giving people full trust

lorelai: i mean ya i quess your right, whats the point?

luke: o don't say that, i mean i'm already grumpy, if u are stars hollow as we know it will be in a slump

lorelai: (gigles)u know what, you depend on me, i'll depend on you

luke: sounds good

lorelai: hey u want to come to my house tonight and watch a movie?

luke: (looking completly stuned) sure

lorelai: great

i know this was rude for me to write this, but i just wanted to write, it would be cool and log on and see if u would finish this script.

diclamer: this is a round off of damnmydoah

I love your stories, especially "Thanks, Nicole". It is currently my gulity pleasure. Your stories keep me going through thes Gilmore girls breaks. Keep writing!

-Mel

i am loving the henry sugar reference! you could give amy a run for her money.

so sweet. and lovely. thanks.

you had nothing to say in closing? me neither except: perfect

Oh! Wonderful! I loved it! I loved the idea of the tree~ so good.

I could live with this ILY declaration. Give ASP your phone number or use your telekinetic powers so we at least get something akin to this. Good stuff!

Cool story. Keep the chapters comin'.

~Jenny

Aww, that was so, so sweet, I loved it!

and there's nothing to add. Wonderful, just that, very peaceful

i absolutely love this story. I like how Lorelai was all calm.