good, it's just wrong when someone dates two siblings, ofcourse this is an extenuating circumstance. nice short.

That was so sad... and beatiful.

Very touching, I hope this is just the start of a longer story. You've made excellent points. I want to hear more. I want him to finally see her!

Oh, ouch. But ouch in, like, a GOOD way. I think this is so believable, and it reminds me that I'd love to know how Lee and Kara met and if maybe he might have felt something for her back then. It certainly ups the angst, doesn't it? Nice job.

Nice short piece :)