As I'm sure everyone else can agree, this is one of of THE most AMAZING pieces of literature to exist ever! Dang shame that its incomplete. But still one hell of a rocker to get your insides moving and shit.

I love your depictions of all the characters. They seem leve, realistic, not over praised and just right. I love Kankuro and Temari's connection (as I said before), and how Baki fits right in as that father-not-so-father that they've (Gaara included) needed. The political aspect and your character creation was simply gorgeous! I couldn't get enough of the scene with Baki and the council men.

This story is one of the most creative and amazing pieces out there. And i've come to find that those kinds tend to have been discontinued (for numerous different reasons). It is a shame, but this story can live on with the legacy of MAYBE having been THE best sand sibling story out there. It feels like that to me.

Loved this so much!

~Poodie

This is so amazing! I really love how close Temari and Kankuro are, and how Gaara finds a place but without fitting in per say. Your writing style is so ggod XD I love it so much!

Kanky for sure is my boi! And I just loved every minute of him! Baki seems like a lovable lot. Temari is crushing on pineapples XD And Gaara is rolling in.

Although I loved this chapter overall, my favourite part would be the very last part when they reached home. Everything from there was gold! I loved the entire story though. Your description was amazing without getting repetitive, or feeling like you're drawling on a topic for too long. You are amazing XD I definitely adore your writing style -currently wishing for the same prowess.

This whole thing is the depiction of Sand Siblings that i've been looking for. Gaara seems to be trying, but he isn't all "mushy" and shit :D

Ughhhhhh! So much to say! So little words in my vocabulary to say them!

~Poodie

really cool start here, sorry to see that it hasn't been updated in a long time!

why don't you continue

Oh my god, this was breathtaking. The dynamics between the three of them were so natural, so real. I love how close you make Ksnkurou and Temari, and how Gaara is like a missing puzzle piece, trying to find a place to fit himself in. The inclusion of Baki makes me giddy and aaahhh, yes, I love fics that fill in canon gaps.

Thank you so much for writing this piece! It was exactly what I wanted to read.

I;ve been searching for a story like this for a LOONG time... really hope you continue it, it's a gem!

Oooooohh! this is a good story! are you ever going to update? because it's wonderful. I'm in love with Gaara, so you MUST pick this story back up.

This was the first time I read something along this plot line - most suna!sibs fics I read consisted of fluffy drabbles, :P

I am loving how real they read. I can feel the uncertainty, and you can really tell how they relate to each other as siblings. I'm also really into politics in the naruto!universe, so the power plays in suna is also part of why i really like the story so far.

Although, it's been four years? :D I still hope one day your naruto muse inspires you to finish this story. Thank you for sharing your fic with the world, _

Oh please update, please update, please update!

Omg! :O This chapter was AWESOME. Incredibly written out. Very, very nice.

I love this fic! I do hope you continue? Otherwise it'll be such a waste ..

I really, really like this! Please, continue it..

Very few people have ever approached this topic at all and it fascinates me. THANK YOU for writing it. Not only that, you do it very skillfully.

Ops. I just reviewed you, (for chp. 2) and afterwards realized that the link list I had been following switched authors without labeling it, so this is actually the only one of your fics I have read. -just ignore everything I said about the other fics, please?

This seriously is an awesome fic, that I really enjoyed, and would love to see more of. I love the mood and the characterizations and the mystery, and you're an excellent writer. Thanks again for writing and sharing this.

Ack. This is great, and I really want more of it. I love your multi-chapter fics in general-you're a great writer. Your single-chapter fics are good too, but I love the depth of the two multi-chapter ones I've read. Anyhow, you have a great handle on mood-it's very sparse and powerful, perfect for the sand-sibs. REally excellent writing. Thanks for writing and sharing-it was a fun read.