| Reviews for Pretend, No More |
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   lara5170 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016 Nice story |
| cathern.cain chapter 1 . 10/16/2016 All in all it is a good stories but you need to do some sentence structuring and use quotation marks. It is a little hard to read without the correct layout. Still going to be added to favorites thou. |
| RozenKnightxXOo chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 Okay, this is really good, but you might want to add some punctuation as well as separation when it comes to certain lines and parts, especially dialogue. |
| Fear-Fades-Hope-Lives-4Eva chapter 1 . 11/30/2012 I think fanfiction freaked out your grammar and deleted some words in your story. O.O |
| youkokurama123 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012 eh, it was ok, not the best, but pretty good. |
| Death marininja chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 Awesome and great job on the whole story! |
| SuicidalxDolly chapter 1 . 1/31/2011 Yay a happy ending I love it lol |
| DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 11/18/2010 Love the story, Hope you'll update the story, ASAP! |
| Nu'est lover chapter 1 . 11/14/2010 I loved it. It was cute |
| The KumiKo chapter 1 . 7/11/2010 i freakin it! |
| Rhianna224 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 aww sweet |
| SongSiren chapter 1 . 8/23/2008 Perfect! Though I was hoping for a more tingly-feeling oneshot, this was great! It looks like you would be a good SesshomaruxKagome writer, too. |
| kyekye chapter 1 . 9/15/2007 clean version? what happend to the un clean version eather way it was really good |
| ForbiddenKitsuneNin chapter 1 . 9/5/2007 Muy bien |
| KaylynnLoussier chapter 1 . 7/29/2007 Ha ha poor InuYasha and Miroku... Chipmonks will rule the world! Mwa ha ha ha! |
