Now that was an adventure, I liked what you did. i pictured something like this is how John found out about her birthday.

Great job with the character interaction! I laughed just about anytime Sheppard was conversing with McKay or Weir... which was practically throughout the whole story! Yup, I was curious about how he knew her birthday and your story was a great answer to my curiousity.

Aw! Sweet, funny, in-character, totally cute! :)

I especially love the bit on the mainland - nice to see that side of the planet...

Thanks!

hehe Ahh I love McKay :P

Brought a smile to my face :)

Keep up the exelent-ay work!

Aw so cute!

Makes sense too :D Really loved it!

You know I think this was great! So I'm just saying it again! It's great!

The mints, the mints.. bahahahaha...

Hehe, that dialogue was great. Funny stuff.