Chapters 25 and 26 are the same.

This is a great story, I'm always looking for a good Calleigh/Horation story. This is excellent, I'm sorry its over.

Good story so far, but "te quiero" is "I want you", and is often used as a pick up line. Te amo is I love you.

I admit it's not much if you're going for closure, but it certainly has a TV script feel to it. Very nice and thank you for it.

*laughs* I'm sure she will. Any chance that she'd leave it out for her entire department to peruse? _~

A nice, sympathetic judge. How refreshing. _

A sure sign of a keeper. _ Very nice Horatio.

Cool! Nice scene and research/knowledge. Very nice touch.

Very nice crossover. I love the teasing.

Reads very much like an episode(s). I can really see it. Very nice.

Very realistic. You fill in conversation gaps that are left out in the series where people just know what everyone is talking about or have absolutely no clue. heh.

Loved that phone exchange. I'm going to be rereading it a lot. I look forward to seeing what you do with the story. I like the rhythm so far.

I enjoyed your CSI story. It's such a pleasure to read a story that is well crafted w/ good dialogue and not riddled w/ spelling mistakes, etc.

So many people drop their stories in the middle. It's great to read one to completion.

I'm also glad it wasn't full of slash.

Thanks for the enjoyable read. Now I think I have to bop over to see what else you have written.

Thanks for sharing your story.

best,

mk

I just finished this and wanted to let you know what an awesome job you did with this. I loved it.

wonderful story, please you have to add another chapter to yhis, its really really good. I love it