BEST. STORY. EVER. I'm serious! Amazingly written and such a great storyline! Hehe! JESS NEEDS MOOOOOORE! MY version of FanFiction does not let me see when this was last updated or if it is in progress or not! I really hope this is not the end to this story! It is so good! KEEP WRITING! x

so good

Hey there,

I just read your story and think it's great! You have a great plot, and even though i love a good snuggly relationship, i think the ups and downs are more realistic, interesting and not too mushy.

And i love how you did the flashback. I really felt for Lily coz it was kinda unexpected yet also realistic...

I will just say that your story is great..to sum it up, so plz plz plz keep writing.

I just wanna know, will Lily actually end up breaking up with John?

cyaz

great,James is so sweet!

I know the feeling. If it were to slow down though, I would probably realized just how messed up everything I do is anyways and I would want it to go fast so I wouldn't realize how pointless some of the stupid stuff I do is. But yeah, it's all fun and games. And beautiful chapter!

That was great. Better than the last chapter (also it was good, too). I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You get better everytime (I think).

yeah - you kinda stuffed the follow up...

and the follow follow up as well...

they just didn't live up to the "Much Anticipated Kiss."

Maybe you should write a new story and stick another in there... it could work you know... and that way, you can improve on your "Much Anticipated Kiss"'s...

(sorry, on high)...

er, wow.

X

please update soon and no the flash back was very informational. i think lily and james are together forevrr and any one who gets inthere way should DIE

wow what a wonderful story update soon!

Why did she collapse? Out of emotional exaustion or did she just start crying? I was a little confused about all that. But I just started reading your story and I like it but I do think it moves so fast. And there are so many drastic ups and downs it's hard to keep it straight. But I'll keep reading to see what happens between James and Lily! Try working on developing their emotions more.

Good Job!

-LP-

When John disappears...hah, that would be funny! :) I luv the story!

Im totally loving this fic. Im so glad that you havent made the story cliche and that both Lily and James have their faults. You've managed to turn a simplistic plot into a unique, realistic and intense piece of writng jampacked with potential. Keep up the great work!

As always great writting, i like the way things are going now.

The flashback seems as realistic as all emotions your portray in this, and thats a gift around fanfiction i tell you.

The ending was the frosting on the cake, really nice - im glad it was there otherwise the chapter would have been "short" in a way!

Thanks for explaining the friends thing, but that just makes me wonder if she will have any other friends since she is sort of "changing"!

I hope you will update soon, the wait is unbearable :)

JK

that was great too bad her first time wasn't w/ james