You switched your tenses a couple of times in the chapter so watch out for that. I can't wait to see what happens now. I had to reread the story because it's been forever. I hope you can update soon!

good story so far!

its really getting interesting, i cant wait to read more _

interesting...

please continue.. :)

AMAZING story! Please update soon. I can tell it is going to be good.

I like it, it has really good detail, keep up the good work!

-Dodgery

awesome...update soon...

Hello write more soon. I can already tell this is going to be a great fanfic. You just have ot write more or i don't know wat i'll do

I was worried at first. time travel frightens me but then i remembered that its you. it has to be good.

i love ya kitten,

sorry about vanishing my dad's an asshat

Oh my!

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I was thinking: That sounds like Yiddish! Maybe it was...maybe I'm just crazy. I'm not too sure, but it's gotta be one of them, right?

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Quite.

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Cheers,

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It's a good start. So far I'm really interested. It doesn't sound like any of the other time travel stories that I've read and that's a great thing. Creativity is always good. Anyway, keep it up and update soon

Hey this sounds awesome! Sorry for not reviewing the first chapter but I just found this. I like it so far. It sounds very real, compared to the others I've read ((Heh, me included)) Please continue this and update ASAP!

~Dreamless_Mermaid~

Awesome Cards, this is awesome, better than World Pizza. Realistic, orginial, oh, I can't wait for more!

Liking it, liking it...

Hmm...I'd like to see where this is going. Keep it up!

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Cheers,

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