Loved it!

I love the compassion of your piece, Thank you!

That was beautiful. A well-written, charming piece - subtle, understated and absorbing. You've taken an interesting, original approach and I love it. This is everything a short story should be. Thank you.

Wow, this was quite good. I'm not sure how I didn't find it before or how it got so few reviews. I love the OC perspective, and the writing is very clean-you don't make the mistake of "telling instead of showing" like so many writers do. Keep up the great work!

I have to tell you this is one of the best little no one in particular stories i have read. Your OC's are good enough to be Cannon. great job. thanks for sharing

This was amazing. I love the end. "heroes are born". Simply beautiful

Though I think pretty much everyone on the expedition is going to be aware of who Sheppard is, I liked this nice little story.

Nice behind the scenes tag to this episode. Interesting POV from someone not in the main group of characters.

Thats so sweet! Let me know if you want a beta btw (leapfrogjb )

stonedtoad

Awe. How sweet. :D

Great! This is what the show needs - tags like this :) I'm adding you to favorite author list!

Wonderful! I really enjoyed your story! Nice to see Atlantis from the perspective of someone "behind the scenes".

This was really lovely. Nice interlude scene. And I can so see it happening. Great job.