I can't wait for you to upload the next chapter! I'm wondering is this story about the fall of Crystal Tokyo and Neo-Queen Serenity?

I know that you wrote this so very long ago, but I wanted to review anyway because this story is absolutely amazing. You have such an interesting idea in this story, and your writing style is clear and pretty and easy to read. The character you built have flaws and are not just one of those "I am perfect" types that are seen a lot on this site.

I have fallen in love with this story. There is such a lack of quality Setsuna fiction, and I am happy to have found this little jewel. I was sad when I noticed the date this was posted (so many years ago!), so I don't have too much hope in an update, but at least this is lengthy and beautiful and I know I will be rereading it a lot.

Thank you for sharing it! It has certainly made me a happy reader!

Take care.

this story is fantastic. i had to read it twice. i just finished reading brave new world by aldous huxley, and this story made me think of that. you portrayed very aptly what can happen to a society when it sits in stillness for to long, how it can become stangnent. i've always been fascinated by the ideal of a utopia and how it is impossible. please continue writing this! i love reading things that make me think. good job!

Wow. I wonder when you're going to pick this story up again.

It's a bit shocking that Crystal Tokyo isn't the utopia most have assumed it is. But perhaps we shouldn't be surprised? Small Lady is 903 years old. And we haven't really had a good explanation for it (officially). The people in Crystal Tokyo are moving through life stilted-ly. And poor Mamoru is looking for Usagi, who isn't present in Neo-Queen Serenity. But Mamoru is in Endymion-more or less stuck. I'm surprised Small Lady is still somewhat sane. And I wonder where Usagi is? Is she stuck only in dreams? (Though, I would've thought Endymion/Mamoru would've had more control over himself. But he must be at his breaking point. And Setsuna knows he's not really looking for her.)

The banishment of the protesters is a necessary thing to further the past, but to those who don't know, it seems cruel.

Perhaps the banishment of chaos, banished love as well? Afterall, sometimes love is the most chaotic of all... It's certainly not orderly and neat.

I wonder what was sacrificed to bring about this Crystal Tokyo. It's a mystery. :)

I do hope you continue it. I almost thought (from the length) that it was all here, but it's not. :(

-AKung

PS: What happened to the Golden Crystal?

Hi Jade,

I've got a question: You had once posted a Sailor Moon story placed in the future, featuring all Senshi and the four Generals. I don't remember its name, but I'm clear that you are the author. But where has that story gone? I took a look at if you had changed it to another archive, but nothing... where has it gone, because the story was so nice and I would love to read the end of it. It would be kind of you, if you would answer me on the aboce email-address. Thanks! Kris

u haven't updated in a really long time...but could u update soon?

I've never even seen/read Sailor Moon and I love this! Very good, I believe, very good.

This is great! Please update soon!

Hmm. That was pretty bent.

It's interesting that the story is about "the Halo Effect," where we tend to over-simplify things ethically... and then you go and make out the Neo-Queen as this monstrous, inhuman Intelligence that we can't understand.

To me, the story was kinda boring because I don't think anybody acted like people.

hey jade!

you have me intrigued. I love how you play on the mythological/spiritual aspects of SM. Your approach to Setsuna, Endymion, Chibi-Usa and especially the Neo-Queen is amazing. I really like how you're using your writing style to set up a mood of mystery and revolution. Keep up the amazing work and update soon! This fic is on my favorites list now!

A beautiful start to a great story! I'm already wanting more XD I hope not to have to wait a very long time for the next chapter, as this is too good to be on the sidelines

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this first part was like Setsuna, almost.. very mysterious, but clear, and somehat confusing all at the same time.

i kept thinking of the story "pyrexia" for some reason... they are not the same but it kept nagging at the back of my head for some reason...

anyway, looking forward to the next part.

wow I really love this story! its hard to beleave Neo Queen Serenity is so mean but in a way I han see it, anyway please update soon!

I adore this. I love how you portray Setsuna, and Endymion, and Small Lady. This is a beautiful story, please continue this. :) I also admire how well you've written this, and how you've played Serenity's character out. It sort of reminds me of the game Lunar in someways. :) Great job! I look forward to more!

-Twiggilala

Wow, what a unique story. I like your passive-style of suspense, to be honest. It doesn't keep me on my toes, but it keeps me thinking. Please continue!