I watch Kim possible and I love this it's amazing please make another one continue of them having sex but don't let her get pregnant it will ruin the whole sex life and make a story about them getting married and enjoying there sex life constantly plz it would be ami

I really think you should make them have sex in future chapters as it stimulates a good feeling in the readers privates, releasing oxytocin and making it more likely for them to leave you a thumbs up. Nice cliffhanger for the end of the first chapter though I am feeling dirty, so could you speed up the sexual tension and hints.
Lovely work,
Hermione

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jakearuna

Please email me the unedited version

Can someone direct email me the link to the unedited version of the lemon, please?

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Thank you in advance

This was an amazing story. I like how u builder it up to final chapter and how everything played out. I enjoy reading this very much. Keep on writing.

Hailstorm

great

I love this tale: Even without the erotic bit, it would be awesome. The way I read it, the two already loved each other and they came to realize that they desired each other, as well.

I enjoyed the fact that you had both parties have previous relationships, even being in current ones, with no jealousy towards them. You also didn't use the device of them in relationships with jerks...George seemed a nice guy and Kim was clearly depressed to have to tell him that he wasn't 'the one'. Ron seemed to be honestly fond of Jenny.

In the end, the past is in the past and the two seem to be looking forward to a future.

Again, great work.

You do have a flair for the KP/RS relationship stuff. First rate.

I was on chapter 2 and I thought chapter 1 and 2 made no sense to me

beautiful ending

hey you did great if someone who dont like sex talk read this yet read your warning then they shouldn't get offended at all you warn readers right

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hahaha teasing

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nice and sweet